“Therefore, the most important way to solve the problem of the plot not being exciting is what you want your novel to become.”

Looking at the somewhat unfathomable Four Palace Moon in front of him, Kasumi Hills Shiyu also showed doubts and was a little puzzled for a while.

“What do I want the novel to be…?”

“Can you be more specific?”

Such a general concept was completely incomprehensible to Shiwa Kasumigaoka.

Since you don’t understand, then ask the person who understands in front of you.

“Then I’ll give you an example…”

It seems that he was waiting for Kasumigaoka Shiyu to ask this sentence, and he didn’t even have 0.1 seconds to think about it, as if he had already prepared an answer, and after looking around at everyone for a week, he slowly spoke, holding up a wonderful example of the four-house moon style.

“For example, now I am the male protagonist in the novel, and you are the female characters “Nine Zero Seven” who will also appear in this novel…”

Hearing Shinomiya Yuki give such an example, Yukinoshita Yukino, who is very familiar with Shinomiya Yuki’s character, is not clear, and his own minister wants to take advantage of his mouth again…

“Sorry, let me refuse.”

“Because I really can’t accept the setting that the minister is the male protagonist…”

However, everyone except Yukinoshita Yukino found the analogy of Shinomiya Moon interesting.

Especially Shiyu Kasumigaokaoka, with her eyes with a strange color, she even thought that this was a good idea.

“Well, of course, this is just an example, if you feel bad, I can also make you the male lead…”

Faced with Shinomiyatsuki’s “kindness”, Yukinoshita Yukino also wisely chose to refuse.

However, she couldn’t resist everyone’s expectant gaze, so she reluctantly agreed to the example of Shigongyue.

“Anyway, in this way, everyone agrees, right?”

Nodding, Shinomiya Yue also continued to speak.

“Then, first of all, in the setting of Kasumigaoka’s novel, the male protagonist is the kind of character who is very popular with the opposite sex, but extremely sensitive in his heart, and you now have such a character in your heart…”

Immediately after, Shinomiya Tsuki once again began to introduce the environmental design in the novel.

“Now, let’s say we have Koga as the heroine…”

“Eh…”

Koga Penge himself did not expect that, after all, among so many girls present, she should be relatively ordinary and have no very obvious characteristics.

However, even so, at this time, hearing that Shinomiya Yue asked her to be the heroine, although it was only an example, still felt extremely happy.

“Koga, to tell you the truth, are you a little happy now?”

“There are indeed some, senior.”

Nodding, Shinomiya Tsuki was also the first point of these light novels to everyone.

“It’s about understanding the relationship between your fiction audience, so try to write a plot that fits your fiction audience and appeals to them.”

“And in the youth campus novel drama, what is the favorite of ordinary girls is, of course, the plot where the ordinary Cinderella meets the prince is dreamed of being like a pengee.”

“That’s right…”

Shiyu Kasumigaoka who listened was also thoughtful…

It’s just that Yukinoshita Yukinoshita on the side questioned.

“If it’s just to cater to readers, it’s not about flowing in”

“Well, 100% it would be…”

“……”

Hearing Shinomiyatsuki’s answer, Yukino was also silent, thinking that Shinomiya Yuki would have some high opinions, but it turned out to be just the most shallow cliché fast food text.

“In that case, isn’t it not as good as Senior Sister Kasumigaoka’s current level?”

“Good question, this is the second example I want to give.”

After a pause, Sigong Yue, who had sorted out her thoughts, also slowly spoke.

“If, just when I was already friends with Pune and not yet in a relationship, by chance, due to some coincidences, I joined a strange club, and there was a classmate Yukino who liked to read quietly, looked cute, and was very cold in the class, did the story begin to attract a little?”

“Indeed, the plot of Ome meeting the sky is also the bridge of a classic love novel”

After giving Yukinoshita Yukino a “You know it very well” look, Shinomiya Yuki also continued to speak.

“Considering that this is a school-type youth love novel, if you join a beautiful senior sister and a confused senior sister messes in, as long as the attributes are not repeated, then the readability of the work will also keep up with a level.”

Shinomiyazuki’s words also made Shiyu, who listened quietly, think of something, and instead asked Shiyue Shiyue about Shinomiya.

“Ah, how do I feel that what you are depicting is not a campus novel of the youth love department, but more like a harem novel…”

“Hahaha… Is there any…? ”

Laughing, Shigong Yue did not feel like he was poked at all, and still said very calmly.

“If it’s a campus novel of the Youth Love Department, then there are more regrets, isn’t youth like this?”

“Don’t you argue that it’s a harem novel, Minister?”

The eyes under the snow are like icebergs, and the eyes of the four palaces have long been accustomed to nature, and in the face of this “disgusted” eyes, there will be no fluctuations at all….

“It’s been so far away…”

“I think, I see what you mean…”

After elegantly raising the black teacup in his hand, Kasumigaoka Shiyu also said such words with a blank eyebrow.

“Meaning, what do you mean? Does it mean that youth is regret? ”

Koga Tomoe said that he couldn’t keep up with the rhythm of the other party at all.

At this time, Shiwa Kasumigaoka shook his head and dismissed Koga Tomoe’s speculation that it would not sound like the answer.

“Actually, from the beginning, the fourth palace jun gave an explanation…”

Looking at the appearance of Shiyu Kasumigaoka, Shinomiya Yue was also slightly surprised for a second, and then said praisefully.

“It seems that Senior Sister Kasumigaoka, are you still very smart?”

“Generally…”

Shiwa Kasumigaoka calmly accepted Shinomiyatsuki’s compliment, and then explained to Koga Tomoe, who was still puzzled.

“It’s that sentence, [the most important thing to solve the problem that the plot is not exciting enough is what you want your novel to become]

Accurately retold the original sentence of the fourth palace moon, and even the punctuation was not wrong.

The sentence that seems to have no connection is actually the solution told by Shinomiyatsuki.

Understand what the reader wants to see, understand what you want, understand what the reader likes to see, understand what you want, and that’s it.

“I understand the reason, so why this mysterious way, Minister?” 、

Can’t you say it well?

Yukinoshita Yukino couldn’t help but ask.

“Actually, there is no reason, but I recently read a manga about the Zhidou genre and felt something, so I wanted to try it…”

“……”

Listening to the speechless reason said by Shinomiyatsuki, Yukino couldn’t say a word.

However, because of this, this person will be her minister…

And at this moment, in the heart of Kasumigaoka Shiyu, there was only one thought.

Sure enough, even in reality, Bai Yue is still an interesting person…

Interesting, that’s enough!

Because, interesting souls are one of a million…

……_

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