The Daily Life of a Light Novel Writer

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When everyone was seated, a novel reflection meeting about Shiwa Kasumigaoka presided over by Shizuki Shinomiya, who was a minister, was also planned as the theme of today’s club activities.

Sitting opposite everyone was Shiwa Kasumigaoka with a calm face, and everyone from the study department took a Koga Tomoe to sit on the other side, and the whole scene was as if some serious hearing was about to be held.

After Fumino Furuhashi, who was in charge of the tea from the Graduate Division, prepared the necessary mellow black tea, the hearing on “Thoughts on the Work” officially began.

Shiyu, who came out independently, was also the first to speak, and saluted very modestly.

“Then, please give your thoughts carefully, I will listen carefully.”

Even knowing that there was indeed a problem with her work, she maintained her grace and calmness.

Although not all of the people in front of you may be able to give useful suggestions, as a light novel master who has been famous for a long time, it is still necessary to hear the impressions of ordinary readers from their perspective.

“Then, let me talk about my feelings first, just a little superficial understanding…”

Fumino Furuhashi, who was appointed as the “pioneer” by Shinomiyatsuki, spoke first.

As a genius in the liberal arts, although Fumino Furuhashi has not written a novel, it is still relatively easy to understand the emotions of the characters in it.

“It’s a very good novel, although the story is not very much, but it is very smooth,”

Shiwa Kasumigaoka also nodded, obviously such an answer was expected by her.

But after that, Fumino Furuhashi’s words were no longer what she expected.

“However, it is just too smooth, so it is difficult to give unexpected surprises, that is, it lacks attractive charm.”

“In other words, the story of the novel is too boring and unnovel…”

Looking at Shiyu Kasumigaoka who fell silent, Furuhashi Fumino thought that what he said was too much, and also quickly comforted.

“Of course, on the whole, it’s still a very good novel, Senior Sister Kasumigaoka.”

“You’re absolutely right…”

Although it was surprising that Guqiao could say such a thing, in fact, what the other party said was very reasonable.

When it comes to his own works, Kasumigaoka Shiwa always accepts opinions seriously.

Immediately following the opening is Riju Ogata, who appears second as the “second forward”.

As a genius in science, light novels, especially those whose main selling points are delicate descriptions and youthful sourness, are completely incomprehensible.

After hesitating repeatedly, Ogata Riju also took a gentle breath and made up her mind to speak.

“I think it’s a very powerful novel, powerful in every sense, although I can’t see where it is, in short, it is very powerful.”

In a word, it is unclear and powerful…

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“Is it my turn?”

The “backbone” of the third place in order is Yukinoshita Yukino, who has a very vicious eye and a very vicious mouth when evaluating light novels.

“For my personal preference, I hardly read this type of novel.”

After slowly closing his big eyes with long eyelashes, and opening them again, Yukino continued to speak.

“However, since I have seen it, there are still some impressions.”

“If you look at my assessment of Light Novels, this is a bit bad.”

“Well said!”

Shinomiya Yuki also silently praised Yukinoshita Yukinoshita in his heart.

Yukishita Yukino also cleared her throat and continued to comment.

“In the end, the biggest reason is that the plot is a little too thin, even if there is a place for suspense, it is easy to guess, in this case, even if the next plot is different from my idea as a reader, it is not attractive at all.”

Unlike Fumino Furuhashi, Yukinoshita Yukino is the kind of criticism that is completely merciless.

“Of course, the advantage is also obvious, that is, it is very good writing, even if it is very famous in the light novel industry now.”

“Thank you for correcting…”

Nodding, Shiwa Kasumigaoka also sincerely accepted Yukoshita’s opinion, which she had known for a long time, and her editor, Machida Enko, had already told her similar words.

Rather, the other party’s gaze was able to be on par with an editor who had been in the light novel industry for many years, which surprised Senior Sister Kasumigaoka.

The next one is Koga Tomoe, who is a “partial general”.

But the most nervous person on the field right now is her, if you want to say why, because everyone present will make her feel great pressure, because in this group of people, only she has an ordinary normal level.

More than the cuteness of normal female high school students, the aesthetics of normal high school girls, and the experience of normal female high school students, so what she gives is also the evaluation of normal high school girls.

“I think it’s pretty…”

“Isn’t the love between Lunjun and Megumi very touching, although it has been tested a lot, but if they are still together in the end, it will be a happy ending.”

Sure enough, it’s a love brain!

Shinomiya Tsuki is also not surprised by Koga Tomoe’s comments, and if there is any expectation of her being able to say something valuable, then it is Shinomiyatsuki’s own problem.

The final impression was explained by the “general” Shinomiyatsuki himself.

In fact, after reading the original manuscript of Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s novel yesterday, Shinomiyazuki understood where the other party’s problem was.

So after putting down the black tea in his hand and taking a sip, Shinomiya Yue said expressionlessly.

“If I judge by the core elements of a light novel, I will only give 4 out of 10 points.”

Shinomiya Yue also gave failing results without mercy.

“The delicate writing is worth 1 point, the audience reason for the love novel is worth 1 point, there is a clear main line and another 1 point, and the friendship attached to the reason that Kasumigaoka is very in line with my aesthetic as the author is 1 point.”

“Other places are below the standard, that is, completely unqualified.”

Of course, in fact, it is not as bad as Shinomiyaki said, but the object of Shinomiyatsuki’s analogy is the previous Kasumigaoka Shiwa, which means that compared to the scores given by her previous works, this time the work is completely subparing.

Listening to Shinomiyatsuki’s merciless evaluation, Kasumigaoka Shiyu was like a schoolboy who was criticized by the teacher, but simply pursed his lips, did not make any rebuttal, and listened carefully.

Now the mood of the fourth palace moon is only one word, cool!

“Wouldn’t it be too much, Minister.”

Looking at Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s expression, Furuhashi Fumino also whispered to Shinomiyatsuki.

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