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Chapter 137 "Dream Master of Myriad Realms" (44-character chapter)

Chapter 137 "Dream Master of Myriad Realms" ([-]-character chapter)
At this time, Tian Yunxiao heard Sister Bao's remarks to the big goose, and said:

"Big Goose, Sister Bao really taught you how to write a masterpiece by tearing it apart and breaking it into pieces, but, if you write it like this, it feels like the upper limit is a masterpiece.

How about you listen to my idea? "

At this time, after hearing Tian Yunxiao's words, Sister Bao was very surprised and said:
"Old Tian, ​​are you willing to come up with your idea? Do you really want to teach all the Twelve Heavenly Kings of Qidian?"

After Tian Yunxiao heard Sister Bao's words at this time, she quickly said: "No, no, my dream is only half at most?"

At this time, three black lines clearly appeared on Sister Bao's forehead, and she said, "I'm just talking about it, do you really dare to admit it? Fan is dead!"

……

After hearing Tian Yunxiao's words, Big Goose quickly asked: "Brother Tian, ​​tell me what you think! Let me learn!"

After Tian Yunxiao heard the anxious words of the big goose at this time, he said calmly:
"First of all, Sister Bao's thinking is very correct. It is a very good choice to choose the world of Xiao Li Feidao in the first world of the human world, and this world is indeed very easy to write.

Because this world is indeed full of beasts, as long as you keep killing and killing, there is Liancheng Jue in the same world, but Liancheng Jue's adaptation of the TV series is not as well-known as Xiao Li Feidao, so it is a bit unpopular.

Or to give a similar example, the courtyard house that has been very popular recently.Why are the fans of this show always so popular?

I personally think that the reason for the good writing accounts for a large part of the proportion, because the people in this drama are not said to be good people, right?Anyway, there are not many, so you write through this book and teach all the bad guys a lesson.

Is it cool to write like this?Very cool, right?
There is also the advantage of writing a fan, you don’t need to bother to portray the heroine, after all, the readers of Qidian now have very high requirements for emotional dramas.

If you can’t write the heroine well, then it’s better not to write it. If you don’t write the heroine, at most some LSPs will be dissatisfied. But if you can’t write the heroine well, it’s a big poison.

And one of the great advantages of writing a fan is that you don’t have to bother to describe the heroine. The heroine has already been written in the original book. If you want to use whoever is the heroine, you can just write it directly.

Having said that, let's go back to the world of "Sentimental Swordsman Ruthless Sword". This world is indeed very easy to write, because this world has been repeated throughout the world, and it is either a hypocrite or a real villain.

There are not many good people except the protagonist. As long as the killing is decisive, all the people who should be saved will be saved, and those who should be killed will be killed. Doesn’t it make readers feel good to read this way?
Moreover, there is a very beautiful artistic conception in Gu Long's writing, as long as it is "referenced" to your writing, it will make your novel's writing look much more beautiful.

So Sister Bao asked you to write a doujin, I am very supportive, but if you write this kind of doujin, you can say that you can sign a contract, but the upper limit will not be too high, at most it will be a boutique, unless you have a master's pen ..."

(Recently, Lao Tian has written a lot of shallow insights from Lao Tian’s book writing in the past six months. Lao Tian just wants to tell some brothers who want to write books after reading Lao Tian’s books, and briefly talk about what Lao Tian has been writing for nearly half a year. experience.

There may be a lot of things that are picked up, and there may be some things that are wrong. If there is something wrong, please point it out. If Lao Tian thinks what you said is reasonable, he will change it. )
At this time, after hearing what Tian Yunxiao said, Sister Bao immediately said: "Old Tian, ​​the last time I heard such a reasonable thing was the last time! What you said seems to be useless? Didn't you say what you should do?" Change it?"

After Tian Yunxiao heard Sister Bao's words, she said quickly: "Don't worry, don't worry, I haven't finished yet!"

Tian Yunxiao paused here, and continued to say:
"Although there have been fewer books about Gu Long's fans in recent years, there are still quite a few Gu Long's fans in the past few years. There used to be quite a few copies of "Sentimental Swordsman Ruthless Sword", which cannot be written simply by fighting. For something new, it is estimated that at most it will be able to write a high-quality article, and it is a bit difficult to order..."

At this time, the big goose was a little anxious because of Tian Yunxiao's repeated tricks, and said:
"Brother Tian, ​​can you tell me how to write it quickly, and don't continue to play tricks!"

At this time, Tian Yunxiao finally organized his language, and said:
"Don't worry! I don't have to wait until I think about it, okay? You can completely change this thing. You can set up a main world. It's okay to put it in our real world Blue Star, and put it in an overhead world and name it Earth." also can.

These are not important, the main task can be set to help people go to various worlds of the heavens to realize their dreams, how about this profession called a dream master? "

At this time, after hearing what Tian Yunxiao said, Sister Bao said:
"I feel that this idea is so-so. There are too many Zhutianliu books that realize dreams for others. Now it seems that there are books that realize dreams for various plot characters and audiences. few."

After hearing what Sister Bao said at this time, Tian Yunxiao said:

"Don't worry, I haven't finished yet, Brother Bao, how could I design such a clichéd plot for the characters in the plot to realize their dreams? We can completely create a real character.

For example, we can create a silly Baitian who is the second generation of women's clothing, because he was brainwashed by those clear-cut dramas on TV, so he thinks about time travel all day long.

It is also because after watching Xiao Li Feidao's TV series when I was a child, I have always been obsessed with Jiao Junen's peak appearance.

He was also moved by Li Xunhuan's charisma, and often dreamed that he would travel to the world of "Sentimental World Ruthless Sword" to give birth to Li Xunhuan's child. One day, the protagonist knew about this dream.

As for the protagonist, he happens to have the ability to lead people across the world, and the protagonist must help people realize their dreams to complete the task and upgrade. Does such a dream sound like fun? "

At this time, the big goose hadn't said anything, but Sister Bao saw the goodness of this idea at a glance, and said:
"Old Tian, ​​you are indeed a man who became a god with a single book. You have such an amazing brain. This idea is very interesting to hear!"

After hearing Sister Bao's compliment, Tian Yunxiao said: "Of course, otherwise, what do you think I relied on to write Zhu Xian? Do I have a system? Brother Bao!
I haven't finished yet, the next story of the first world must be written around the main line, but, it is necessary to add restrictions to the protagonist, the protagonist cannot be invincible, and the protagonist can be a person with no force value. ordinary people.

But it is also necessary for the protagonist to have the ability to restrain enemies in the mission world.

For example, you can design two relatively rubbish skills, such as Li Jing's passive skills in 100 cold jokes, [-]% of which are empty-handed, and can be designed as a control skill for him.

Then, it seems that a control skill alone is not enough, because the protagonist is an ordinary person without the slightest martial arts, so it is necessary to give the protagonist a skill similar to the ability to summon babies in the game.

You two think about this skill, how can it be designed reasonably? "

The question Tian Yunxiao posed made Big Goose and Sister Bao almost into thinking. After a while, Big Goose suddenly clapped his hands and said:

"Yes, you can give the protagonist the identity of a necromancer, and you can summon baby skeletons from the corpses of the killed enemies, and let the baby skeletons help the protagonist fight!"

After Tian Yunxiao heard the big goose's proposal, three black lines flowed down his forehead, and he said with a livid face:

"Is there any more..."

At this time, the big goose became more and more excited: "Also, the baby skeletons can be upgraded like in the game, so that the protagonist can form an army of skeletons..."

At this time, the big goose saw that the more Tian Yunxiao listened to him, his complexion became worse, and his voice gradually became smaller and smaller.

At this time, Sister Bao, who had been listening next to her, couldn't take it anymore.

Said: "Big Goose, your idea is unreliable. Note that the first world is martial arts. How many dramas does a necromancer in Western Fantasy appear in the world of martial arts? And listen to Lao Tian's idea. I knew it was in sand sculpture style, if it was written according to what you said.

This has become an upgrade text of the invincible stream?Although it is said that fighting monsters and upgrading is an unchanging cool point in online articles, it is not very suitable to put it in the article mentioned by Lao Tian.

My idea is to equip the protagonist with a skill that can force people to sign a contract. After signing the contract, the person who signed the contract cannot go back on his word. "

After Tian Yunxiao heard Sister Bao's words, his eyes lit up, and he said: "Bingo, you are indeed a veteran master, my idol, Brother Bao, the idea you put forward just coincides with mine.

My idea is that the protagonist can be assigned a skill called Jin Dun. The effect is to pay money, and you can appoint others to do things for the protagonist. The success depends on the amount of money. After success, the effect will be very stable.

As long as the person who signed this contract must never go back on his word, and must sign this contract sincerely and willingly to make the contract effective.

And according to the description in Xiao Li Feidao's original book, those so-called masters who have been famous for a long time in the Jianghu, except for Li Xunhuan and A Fei and a few others.

All of them are sanctimonious people, full of benevolence and morality, but in fact they can do all kinds of dirty things in secret, and all of them are very greedy for life and fear of death, greedy for money, lustful, and greedy.

The protagonist can take advantage of these people's weaknesses in human nature and control them to rule the world..."

At this time, after hearing Tian Yunxiao's words, the big goose immediately said excitedly:

"Brother Tian, ​​after dominating the Jianghu, is it necessary to use the power of the entire Jianghu to arrest Li Xunhuan and send him to his employer's bed?"

After Tian Yunxiao heard the big goose's idea, he said very convinced: "What kind of bullshit idea is this? Brother Bao, tell me what's wrong with the big goose's idea!"

At this moment, after hearing what Big Goose said, Sister Bao chuckled and said, "Day Goose, if you have such an idea, it means you haven't read Gu Long's book seriously, who is Li Xunhuan?

That is a well-known gentleman, and his martial arts are very strong, this man can give his own house and his childhood sweetheart cousin to both hands just because of his sworn brother's word.

If this kind of person were to force him, then he would definitely rather die than surrender, and would not submit obediently. "

Tian Yunxiao nodded after hearing Sister Bao's analysis, and said, "That's right, Sister Bao's analysis is very correct..."

After Big Goose heard Sister Bao's analysis at this time, his face immediately collapsed, and he said:

"Ah, it seems to be the case, so how should I write it? Brother Tian, ​​brother Bao, teach me!"

After Tian Yunxiao heard the big goose's words, he felt a little bit of hatred and said:
"Big goose, use your brain and think about it carefully, how should you deal with a gentleman?"

At this time, the big goose's brain finally came to light, and he blurted out:
"Brother Tian, ​​I thought that a gentleman can bully him. Since the protagonist has dominated the entire arena, he can manipulate public opinion..."

When Tian Yunxiao heard that the big goose had finally figured out the correct way to advance the plot of this book, he was very pleased and said:

"Da Goose, fortunately you are not hopeless, you are right, for a protagonist like Li Xunhuan, you can completely manipulate public opinion, and the background of "Sentimental Swordsman Ruthless Sword" is the Ming Dynasty.

The printing technology at that time can be said to be relatively mature. Now that the protagonist has unified the Jianghu, he can use the money of the people in the Jianghu to print newspapers and manipulate public opinion.

And what is the protagonist's biggest advantage over the people in the plot?Say it again!big goose"

At this time, the big goose was confused by Tian Yunxiao's question, and said:

"Do you still need me to say this? Brother Tian, ​​of course it is Goldfinger! The protagonist has 100% empty-handed catch and the two skills of white blade and golden escape. This is a big killer for the characters in the original plot!"

After Tian Yunxiao heard the big goose's words at this time, he put his hands on his forehead, and he had no hope for the big goose's ability to conceive the plot, and said:
"Big Goose, it's not unreasonable for you to pounce for so many years! Sister Bao, come and explain to Big Goose!"

Sister Bao was also dumbfounded by the big goose's statement. After hearing Tian Yunxiao's request, she said: "Big goose, big goose, what Lao Tian said is true. It's not unreasonable for you to fight for so many years. .

Isn't the protagonist's biggest advantage over the characters in the plot clear about the plot?The protagonist can completely use the advantage of being familiar with the plot to manipulate the entire arena! "

At this time, the big goose was woken up by Sister Bao so quickly, and said quickly: "Yes, why didn't I think of such a simple truth? Thank you Brother Tian, ​​thank you Brother Bao, you are chasing food into my mouth , wait for a while, I'm going to make an outline now, by the way, what should be a better name for this book?
Brother Tian, ​​Brother Bao, please help me come up with a name! "

At this moment, Tian Yunxiao and Sister Bao said in unison after hearing the big goose's request:
"Dream Master of Myriad Worlds!"

As soon as Big Goose heard the name Tian Yunxiao and Sister Bao said, he immediately said:
"It's a good name. It's worthy of being named by Brother Tian and Brother Bao at the same time. I'm going to list the details of the first world right now. I'll show you when I've listed it, and then I'll comment on it."

After finishing speaking, he started to write the detailed outline with the tablet computer carried by Big Goose.

……

An hour later, Big Goose showed the two of them the detailed outline he had made. Sister Bao took it over and looked at it first, and said to Tian Yunxiao:
"Old Tian, ​​as expected of you, the big goose who mediated in such a short period of time wrote such a good outline of the story."

After hearing what Sister Bao said, Tian Yunxiao said very curiously:
"Oh? Is this detailed outline of Big Goose Column very good? Show me it!"

Tian Yunxiao took the tablet from Sister Bao, and quickly read the detailed outline written by Big Goose. After reading it, she sat there without speaking for a long time.

At this time, the big goose said proudly: "Brother Tian, ​​are you satisfied with the plot of the story I wrote according to your instructions? Are you so shocked that you can't speak?"

After Tian Yunxiao heard what Big Goose said, he sighed and said, "Big Goose, I've been talking to you for a long time just now, and you wrote such a thing for me?"

 Thank you for your generous reward. Although you made a reward and came to find fault with Lao Tian, ​​Lao Tian is very grateful for not attacking Lao Tian personally.

  Many readers of Laotian said that after reading Laotian’s book, they wanted to write a book. Recently, Laotian wrote a lot of tips for writing books in the book, which may not be true, but this is basically what Laotian has learned in the past six months since writing the book. Summarize some experience.

  Of course, what Lao Tian said is not necessarily true, but if he can help the brothers and help the brothers who read Lao Tian’s book to sign a contract successfully, Lao Tian will be satisfied. The advice that Lao Tian gives to newcomers is to write a fan for the first time. Best of all, if you write about popular fans, you can enjoy the traffic of the original work. If you write about unpopular fans, generally speaking, the subscription rate will be higher. If you just want to sign a contract, writing about fans is definitely the only rule for newcomers. .

  Lao Tian’s first book was written about doujin. At that time, it was a signed website short of 20 characters, but the theme of Lao Tian was not selected well. The first book chose an old game from [-] years ago. The whole starting point was Lao Tian himself. It was written by one person, and there was no traffic at all. In addition, Laotian wrote it himself, so the grades were very poor, and because Laotian finished writing and forgot to post it, Laotian didn't even get full attendance, so he had no choice but to cut it.

  Today is the end of this chapter. Lao Tian overestimated himself. It took Lao Tian too long to analyze the book "Dream Master of Ten Thousand Worlds".
  Also, the image of the big goose written by Lao Tian today is just for plot needs, and the big goose is definitely not as stupid as Lao Tian wrote! !

  
 
(End of this chapter)

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