Fenmu was in a hurry, got up and ran over, and hung on Anasta's slender legs like a koala:

"Oh, don't be like this...Anastha, I've been renewing my relationship with you every night for years. To be honest, I'm a little tired."

"You should be tired by now, so?"

"So can I apply for a permanent relationship? You see, I'm still in place. I feel that Anstasta is very happy when you are with me. You can't just say that you are not happy with your conscience!"

On this point, Anasta can be sure that Femme is right. After encountering this little disaster, the happiness he brought to her alone surpassed the fun she gained from observing and recording the changes of several epochs.

No matter how much the world changes and the times change, those things are always someone else's and have nothing to do with her.

Only on the night of "suicide" on a whim, after meeting that little kid dragging the coffin, Ansta was able to be in the world, no longer independent as a bystander who was getting tired of the world.

Anasta lifted the collar of "Little Femme", and said the answer that had been determined in her heart for a long time:

"Application approved."

As she spoke, she carried Fen Mu into the coffin, closed the lid of the coffin, and said:

"Actually, when you were cuddling with me back then, I thought about tasting you like this, but I thought you were still young, so I didn't want to scare you~"

"Child abuse, help!"

Testimonial

The following content is divided into three parts. 1. Some thoughts on the ending of this article. 2. Self-reflection on this book. 3. Future book ideas

one,

The main line of the story is over here, and I will add some extra stories later.

In fact, I also know that many things have not been written. For example, the sea area of ​​​​the reef in my hometown can be expanded, the mature aunt of the Lord of Eden has not won anything, and even the black goat mentioned a long time ago should have More drama.

But if we intersperse that kind of big plot at a later stage, the most suitable episode to appear in the reef sea area should be the part of the adventure of the Argo ship. A few more words in the group.

I don’t know if you still remember the Ash Paradise in the Lawless Zone. The wolf girl who appeared in it was originally intended to go out as a humanoid of the wolf pack to confirm the life and death of Finmu.

Moreover, as a Western fantasy book, the tone has been maintained for a long time in the daily life (in fact, I prefer to write daily life). The battle plot is the part I don't like very much, so the battle plot is basically simple, and even most of the "God Wars" The goddesses that appeared in the movie were all sanctioned by Fenmu for their tragic actions.

That is also the daily life I want to write about. It's good to be relaxed, and it's not good to be nervous and parting life and death.

But the daily tone still has limitations, that is, it is not easy to add sudden plots. In the normal fighting style, it doesn’t matter if the boss battle bursts out, but the daily writing can’t have two or three chapters of big battle chapters in one go. , too abrupt.

So even if I set the final ending, it is smooth sailing, a smooth and stable daily life, not the classic ending of the kingly fantasy novel: a tangled big boss appears in the last ten chapters, and then the male protagonist defeats the boss, it's over.

two,

It can be regarded as self-reflection. This book is a model of driving high and low. At that time, even the editor regretted it, but personally, I have no regrets, because my ability cannot support the framework, and the decline in grades is inevitable.

Moreover, as the role of master throughout this article, I failed to write her emotional drama well, so I have a big problem.

Fortunately, despite the serious decline in the quality of the works, there are still many lsp readers who have accompanied me to the end. I am very grateful and ashamed.

Because in the later stage, in the past two months, the update time has become late, and the protagonist's name has been strung together from time to time, (even posting chapters). ..I don't know why, as long as I am lazy and don't check the name once in a while, I will really string the protagonist's name.

Many people think that daily writing is easy, even I used to think so, but in fact daily writing is quite difficult, especially the fantasy-style daily writing that is not biased towards combat.

Everyone reads the book because they find this book interesting, and the endless enemies in the combat text and the tone set at the beginning make the way of making "interesting" more repetitive.

But daily writing is more difficult, and the "interesting" obtained from the interaction between men and women is limited, because daily life is as plain as water, and it can make people laugh, but when this small, plain interaction is repeated several times, it is really Just a few handfuls of water.

So before I updated, I was often thinking about how to make the daily life interesting in the latest chapters. Adding more intense battles would spoil the tone, and I didn’t want to put too much ink on the guy who was unexpected by the heroine.

But when many routines, stalks, and inspirations (including inspirations obtained from small books) have been used once, it becomes more difficult for me to make daily life interesting.

If you know of any serious or unserious daily essays that can write more than 200W words, please tell me, I will learn it when I have time.

It's okay to be close to the expert...

three,

If I write a new book, in fact, the attributes of the male protagonist are probably more ma-like. After all, I like to write about the harem.

I have thought about books with a single heroine, but if you want to enrich the content of this type of book, you must add a lot of supporting actress roles, and then let other men walk away, or make a female two, three, four, five, six, there are many plots , but the male lead is a gentleman, so he just doesn't want it.

Now there are two ideas in my mind, one is the game text, more heroines are naturally indispensable, by the way, I have to use the game text to exercise my description of the battle, because I really have an aversion to the battle plot Yes, this has to be overcome.

I am ashamed to say that the first game I read was not serious. The hero collects various game pets, and then has an indescribable plot with the pets...

By the way, in my impression, the novel is fast-forwarding to Purcell, Moore Manor, Xiaohuaxian... It's a pity that it's quite short, but Axia is really cute.

My second thought is Master's essay, but this time the background may be placed in the fairy tale and martial arts. In this context, the taboo and violating the worldly moral emotions are full, and then there are some sisters-in-law and widows. , Auntie, but it is also prone to accidents.

Hey, I really want to write about the type of master who abides by ethics and morality, but is embarrassed and painful under the pursuit of his disciples. However, Master Anna is a bit wild and can't be reserved.

At the end

I have babbled a lot, and I am a little at a loss for what to say. Thank you for taking care of me all the way.

If you are interested, you can also read my other books. If you have a chance, see you in the next book.

good night

 

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