I, Son of Yaoguang, the invincible road in the world

I, Son of Yaoguang, am invincible in the world! (My beautiful master is invincible) Author: Lanyuexing

Modification: Little Book "Tong"

　【brief introduction】

The master master, Empress Liuli, is amazingly talented.The second master is a nine-tailed sky fox, a real goblin!The third master is a pure and clean female sword god, and the fourth master is a generation of sword gods with a childlike face and arrogant... And I have the anger system!I get a lot of rewards just by pissing people off. 【Ding!You have angered the entire sect and obtained the Haotian Divine Body, which will unlock a hundred times your comprehension and a hundred times your cultivation speed! 】【According to ancient legends, those who possess the Haotian Divine Body will eventually become the co-lords of the Three Realms! 】

Rewrite the general direction.

1. Personal definition of QCQS: All beautiful female characters, regardless of whether they are good or bad, must write that they have feelings for the protagonist and then accept it. This is what I think is accepted.The protagonist’s mother is too beautiful to accept (it should be because of seeing some emperor uncles that led to this strange xp, it’s best to be an orphan or a widow or orphan, if necessary, it will be changed to a place). , such as succubus, fox, etc., I personally prefer to accept all races, but it feels a bit outrageous, it depends on the situation.

2. Hate brotherhood (or other relationship with men).In fact, it is not so much hating brotherhood as it is hating brothers (not just brothers, men related to the male lead) who have wives, are even beautiful or have a harem (poisonous, can kill themselves in an instant), brothers have always been The appearance of solo or married is generally tolerable.

3. There are few plots to push girls, especially if they are mentioned briefly.The content of the plot is not redundant but refined and attractive. I don't like it if it is too long.

4. I don’t like the love scenes or even the meat scenes of the male lead’s parents (especially the ones where the mother is very beautiful. The mother’s appearance is ordinary or low and can accept the description of the couple’s affection, but can’t accept the kiss scene or sex scene, even hints). This is what I hope to receive mothers (mothers with ordinary appearance or low appearance can accept it or not), preferably orphans, widowed mothers or orphans.

5. In the world view, the villain rapes a woman from a good family, and even rapes first and then kills. This kind of plot description is unacceptable.

6. Unacceptable thunder/depression:

Dead girl (It’s not good for a particularly beautiful female villain to die, it’s best to assimilate and then accept it, but it also depends on the plot arrangement, I usually don’t read novels like dead beautiful female villain, I personally like to accept it, but the plot needs to die, contradiction)

Leaky girl (uncomfortable and then violent death)

Divine Condor (the thief suffers and then dies suddenly)

green (don't come here)

Molestation (this is not easy to say, slightly acceptable, but violent beating, ripping off the villain's clothes, giving benefits to the villain, holding hands by the villain, etc.)

WRQ (poison point, I generally don’t touch this kind of book, normal books and normal emperors don’t like this kind of plot)

Rape (male lead is strong and vicious female villain is acceptable, good looks are acceptable, but good looks are generally casual)

Heavy Taste (I don't like this kind of book, don't touch it)

Mask flow (or pseudo-identity): How to say this, most of the cases are acceptable, the pushing process uses her own identity, after the event or during the event, the woman knows or suspects that it is the male lead, and the fake identity is designed to push the female. Afterwards, the woman knows that it is the male lead These are acceptable and unacceptable is that the female protagonist likes the male protagonist with a fake identity and then pushes them with a fake identity, and others depend on the situation.

NTL: Under the conditions of implementation, the heroine must try her best to keep her status for the first kiss. If she is not a virgin wife, she can keep her first kiss as a wife.

Feichu (Can't show affection, any physical touch - Dabaa)

To be filled. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

So based on the above, you can roughly know which aspects will be modified and whether it meets your own taste. If necessary, I will overturn and rewrite the character creation and ending, but the content and plot are enough to attract me.

[Modified content]

1. A few scenes in 1v in the book are skipped with material. I don’t want to write in detail, and I can’t write it. The knowledge is blind, and the rest is material.There are many pens and inks in the initial push, and the re-push is skipped with materials.Adding materials is quite painful, and it is easy to template, especially the emperor's uncle type, the writing style is not very good, I haven't written much about emperor's uncle's materials, so I will just read it.

2. No harmony at all (the platform automatically deletes words, sentences and paragraphs or the original manuscript before the author changes the name and content) version.

3. A large amount of space has been revised—tens of thousands of words.

4. Also do not disclose the plot, read it as a new book.

Scanning report:

This book belongs to the invincible little white harem essay, but it is depressed.

Scanning progress: 587 (latest today)

Male lead: Lin Xiao: Obscene, but not completely obscene.The senses are average, and he looks handsome.

Heroine: Master, Liuli (Empress) cc: She has a cold personality, but not completely cold, she may be a money fan, and the latest chapters hint that she may be the reincarnation of a powerful person.Because she is so beautiful, she usually wears a veil.Half strategy, not pushed.

The second master, Ji Yunyou (fox) cc: has a charming personality and seems to be slutty. In fact, except for the male lead, no other male has even touched her fingers (praise), nine tails and nine bodies (one is worth nine).It has been captured but not pushed yet.

The third master, Bai Xu'er cc: High-cold Sword God, has no relationship experience between men and women, so she is easily (x) attacked by the male lead.At present, the strategy has been pushed.

The fourth master, Ye Guoer cc: Tsundere childlike little knife god, a typical arrogant old lolita, liked to bet with the male lead in the early stage, fell in love with him after being educated by the male lead, and even thought about giving up and becoming a god for the male lead.At present, the Raiders have been pushed.

Si Lanqi cc: The master of Yue Palace, when the hero was staying in Yue Palace, he drugged the apprentice to tie him up (non-physical), but was cracked by the hero. After the spanking, he fell in love with the hero. Rescued by the male lead in times of crisis and fell in love with the male lead completely.At present, the Raiders have been pushed.

Su Yunwei cc: The poor apprentice above has a crush on the male lead himself, and later when the male lead returned to the Holy Land, the male lead heard his heartfelt feelings (no need to explain it).At present, the Raiders have been pushed.

Ji Sinan cc: Disciple of Flying Star Palace, after seeing the male protagonist, he immediately fell in love with the male protagonist, and then he was captured.At present, the strategy has been pushed.

Princess Chiling cc: The nine princesses of a certain dynasty fell in love with the hero after seeing the hero. After the hero helped her win the throne, she fell in love with him, and then she was pushed down by the hero together with the above one.At present, the Raiders have been pushed.

Youqing cc: One of the oirans of Miaoyin Pavilion (owned by the second master), it should not have been touched by visual inspection, and the author feels a little uncomfortable if he didn't write it.After meeting the male protagonist, I fell in love with him, which is the kind of push when you see him, but the male protagonist didn't push because he was worried about the problem with the second master. After experiencing roughly the same thing as Si Yunqi, he fell in love with him completely.Pushed down with the (help) of the second master.At present, the strategy has been pushed.

Shen Qingyun cc (????***): Did the author forget this?????? The latest chapter is confiscated.

The former oiran was originally sent by the second master as a bodyguard to protect the male protagonist, but later fell in love with him, and with the (help) of the second master, he was with the above one.At present, the strategy has been pushed, but confiscated??????

Luo Kongying cc: The male protagonist's little apprentice, cute...very strong, a little Japanese loli.Currently half strategy, not pushed.

Linger cc: The ghost saved by the male lead in a village has a body of the Nine Netherworld. Because of the male lead’s help, he regards the male lead as his own brother. I have observed the male lead’s work many times and has a good impression. It should belong to the one who can push Kind of legal loli.Currently in the underworld, this must not be forgotten.At present, the Raiders have not pushed.

Depressed + Lei: 1. The hero has a brother. I personally think that the hero is very miserable.He himself is very motherly, and found a very manly woman... In the end, he even turned into a skeleton, in the real sense.

2. The hero of the latest chapter The hero took away a meaningless fc and wanted to go to the God Realm?????c doesn't want you to want this.I don't know if it will be accepted, there should be an explanation for the acceptance, and I will update it below later.

3. Rejected Si Yunqi's cousin (forgot) because of a mole on her buttocks, and finally wanted to commit herself to the male lead but was rejected. (???) The heroine should have a follow-up article, waiting for an update.The author can die if there is no follow-up article.

4. Some non-protagonists have a harem, but most of them are not described in detail.

5. Soul Transmigration, but before the time travel, there was no relationship with any heroine.

6: The hero **, the cheapest in the novels I have read.

7. I hope you can find this author to communicate with. This author is a living person. Many of the above depressions can be solved well later. Has there been any good works recently? I think there is this book, although it is very white. But the subject matter is relatively new. I thought I would never read systematic texts again. This book made me change my mind.According to part of the description, I still see that the author has a sense of lightning protection... I hope he can change it in the future.

Source: http://tieba.baidu.com/p/7504051640?share=9105 (@我的妈妻花嘉)

Chapter 1 Epic Level Reward, Haotian Divine Body

"Lin Xiao, didn't you say that you want to pass the examination and become the direct disciple of Yaoguang Four Fairies? This is already here, don't be cowardly!"

"Big men don't just talk but don't practice."

"Hahaha... You see Lin Xiao is pretending to be stupid, he must be cowardly."

A group of young people looked down at a handsome young man condescendingly, mocking and laughing to their heart's content.

However, the boy's eyes were empty and confused.

"What the hell... is this time travel?"

Soon, Lin Xiao muttered in a low voice, his eyes regained their vitality, and he kept scanning up and down his own body.

Suddenly, a huge memory flooded into my mind.

After a while, Lin Xiao roughly understood the situation.

He traveled to a world of martial arts called "Tianyuan Continent".

Replaced the identity of an outer disciple of Yaoguang Holy Land.

Yaoguang Holy Land is located in the Southern Tianyu of Tianyuan Continent.

It is the well-deserved number one force in the Southern Heaven Territory, with a profound foundation.

However, he himself is mediocre.

Three full years have passed, and it is still at the first level of the Blood Coagulation Realm.

"Big waste Lin, don't pretend to be dead. The big guy came to see you for the assessment. His pants are all off. Why don't you move your motherfucker?"

Li Yuanxing kicked Lin Xiao, smiling ironically.

"none of your business!"

Lin Xiao didn't hesitate, and directly replied.

The so-called Yaoguang Four Fairies are not only extremely high in cultivation, penetrating the heavens and the earth, but each of them is as beautiful as a fairy.

They rule the Yaoguang Holy Land and are famous in the Tianyuan Continent.

They once said that they only accept one disciple in their life.

Taught by four people.

For this reason, the Four Immortals Assessment was set up.

Whoever can pass the assessment can become their direct disciple and teach them their unique skills.

For the disciples of Yaoguang Holy Land, this is naturally a good thing to reach the sky in one step.

You can also get the chance to get close to four peerless beauties.

In case something super friendly happens with the beautiful masters...

That's not enjoying the blessings of all people!

Unfortunately, things are not as simple as imagined.

The examination of the Four Immortals is extremely difficult.

Over the years.

Countless disciples took part in the assessment one after another, but none of them succeeded, and all of them ended in disastrous failures.

"Yo! Are you still in a temper?"

Li Yuanxing sneered and said, "Lin Xiao, you don't even look at how much you weigh, you are not even worthy to pour the urinal for the four fairies of Yaoguang."

"Still participating in the assessment, where do you have the courage?"

"That's right!"

"If you ask me, Lin Xiao doesn't dare to participate in the Four Immortals Examination!"

Others also laughed.

"Is it the aggressive method?"

Lin Xiao curled his lips, he would not be fooled by this kind of pediatric trick.

Speaking of which, he and Li Yuanxing joined Yaoguang Holy Land in the same year.

But because he was handsome, the female disciples were willing to get close to him, which made Li Yuanxing jealous.

After three years, Li Yuanxing often troubled him.

This time, he agreed to participate in the assessment of the Yaoguang Four Fairies because Li Yuanxing got drunk last night, and he couldn't get off.

"It's a little troublesome!"

Lin Xiao frowned.

He knew that Li Yuanxing would not let him go easily today.

But fighting is definitely not enough to beat the opponent.

Although he is ugly, he has better talent than him, and his cultivation has already reached the sixth level of Blood Coagulation Realm.

If they really fight, they can teach him to be a man in minutes.

Ding!

At this moment, an electronic sound sounded in Lin Xiao's mind.

【Ding!Congratulations to the host for activating the anger system!If the host succeeds in angering others, they will randomly receive rewards. 】

[The size of the reward will depend on the degree of irritation! 】

Lin Xiao was slightly taken aback.

What the hell kind of system is this?