The Coercion of Scum

In this way, I continued to urge the girl to start my own codeword work. Of course, I did not secretly read her novels during this journey, but calmly sorted out my own textbook knowledge. After all, I can’t even have the burden of seniors. Always give her the impression of fishing.

Almost an hour later.

"Ah, senior, I have written 3 chapters..."

A weak voice from Sydney came from the side.

I looked up and saw her tired but excited face.

"Chapter 3, how many words?"

"There are more than 3,000 words in a chapter, 10,000 words in total."

"That's pretty fast."

I mumbled that she shouldn't have the talent of being a code word Ji by accident, and then I went to the computer and looked at her novel.

"Ah, what is this?"

Just looking at the title, I was shocked.

Originally, I thought that such a long paragraph might not actually be the first paragraph of the main text, or it might be the outline, but the title of this paragraph has already been added, so it's all the title of the book.

And Sydney, which I asked in a surprised tone, just tilted her head as a matter of course.

"In order to let readers know that my novel has all the popular elements on the market, I mixed the elements into the novel."

The name of Sydney’s novel is "I was originally a martial arts leader, and I fell into a different world with my cohabiting fiancee. I lost the demon king and upgraded to LV9999. After I discovered that the sister of the blood race was a magical girl apostle, I decided to open the harem with the maid Lolita. Comprehension

So strong! The elements of popular novels on the market are really mixed into the title.

If you think about it this way, the content is probably mixed with these complicated elements.

Although I wanted to praise her, I trembled my eyes and didn't know what to do.

After wanting to kneel down to worship her for a moment, I was immediately moved by the desire to complain.

"Hey, hey, your title is really problematic!"

"Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

"No, no, this problem is too big. The title of light novels is getting longer and longer because there are people like you in the industry... No, it's me."

Halfway through, I found that Sydney kept curling up as if shrinking. Her big watery eyes almost leaked tears. As a result, my heart softened and I could only target myself.

"Senior..."

"The title is too long. The website won't allow you to serialize it, so you need to modify it."

"Ok…"

She obediently followed my advice, and it was not bad for the time being.

"I'll talk about the title or something, now I look at the text."

With that said, I began to look at the content of the novel with gusto.

Although there are only three chapters, it is true that the sparrow is small and complete, and the content unexpectedly fits the title very well.

The protagonist, who is the leader of the martial arts, was attacked by a mysterious man one day, and then fell into a different world to start the road of pretense. Then his cohabiting fiancee also came to another world together, and found that this world has a hierarchy. The protagonist leans on His own martial arts killed the Demon King with a single knife and turned into a world-class existence with a level of 9999. Then, a blood girl who claimed to be the protagonist’s sister appeared in this world, and everyone decided to embark on an adventure.

As for the maid, loli, and cultivation of these elements did not appear, I guess it is not enough space, it should still appear later.

"Senior...that...how is my novel written?"

Sydney, who folded her legs tightly like a maid and crossed her hands in front of her, saw my serious expression, as if she was worried that I might be dissatisfied, and made a weak questioning sound.

Because she seemed to care too much about my evaluation, she actually leaned her body down slightly, the fragrant and soft female body was about to touch me, but she kept a wonderful distance. Fortunately, she turned the long hair ball away from the shawl into balls, otherwise the hanging hair would further erode my heart and let me tear off the baggage of the idol and...

"Ahem, generally speaking, there has been a passing line. But how to say... the combination of too messy elements turns out to be this effect. It is not the imagination that 1 plus 1 is greater than 2, and countless 1s are sandwiched. It became minus 100 together."

"Wow? A negative score? Isn't that over?"

When I accidentally said what I was thinking, Sydney's face changed drastically, almost as if she was about to cry.

"Oh, sorry, I didn't mean that!"

I could only comfort her when I found the gaffe, and then talked a little bit about the advantages of this article.

"This novel is not as useless as imagined, at least the writing is not bad, and the vividness of the characters is very high."

"Hey, is that right?"

There were tears in the corners of her eyes, and when the tears were about to flow, my words made the teardrop rein in the cliff.

And I nodded repeatedly.

"Actually, you are good at writing, so don't worry. With this writing, you can mix everything well. With such a solid foundation for future counter-offensives, you don't have to worry about writing good articles."

"Yes, that's it."

Sydney quickly wiped the corners of her eyes, and then looked at me like a cub waiting to be fed.

That pitiful look does make people feel compassionate, and I realize this very deeply.

This girl is not as simple as she imagined... No, she has a poor weapon that she didn't even realize.

Thinking of this, I couldn't help but speak to Sydney.

"I want to ask you something."

"Ok."

"You said you have no friends, so would anyone bully you?"

"Uh...it doesn't seem to be... Although occasionally terrible gangsters or people from the Spice Girls group come and scold me, they suddenly left after a short while."

Her eyes floated, she put on an expression of hard thinking, and finally gave me this answer.

really…

I can even imagine that scene.

The lonely and frustrated girl was surrounded by the gangsters to a corner. Everyone wanted to bully her, but before she started, she was forced to stop by the negative energy and pitiful aura emitted from her body, and finally walked away boringly.

In other words, the Sydney girl is full of problems, so to change all of this, it is far from improving her writing ability, and the direction of finding friends by writing novels is even more wrong. She should become a vigorous girl first.

But this question is also very tricky. Ability and character are almost always related to the chicken or the egg. I don't know where to start first.