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"But even so, during the one-on-one duel, the male number two discovered that the male pig's foot was just a layman with a strong talent, but before he transformed into strength, he was still a fighting scum. But in this short duel process , the male pig's feet are constantly improving like a monster, and what's even more frightening is that he keeps absorbing various technical moves displayed by the male number two. At the end of the duel, the male number two actually felt the pressure from the opponent, forcing him to use Only one-tenth of the skill and two-tenth of the skill can be achieved without a male pig's foot."

"In terms of sports, the male pig's feet, who have always been the pride of heaven, have never been so aggrieved, let alone being zero-blocked by others, playing like a monkey, coupled with the coldness of the male number two, it seems to look down on him. "Basketball isn't very interesting, I don't want to play anymore", plus the attitude of "playing well" after winning. The male pig's feet exploded on the spot, the first time there was The feeling of being abused and cried."

"At this time, the original intention of the male pig's feet to play basketball is no longer to get close to the goddess, but to defeat the male number two with dignity."

"As for the male No. [-]? When he turned around and left, he felt his heart beating so violently for a long time. He couldn't help but say 'interesting man' in his heart, and once again felt the interest that basketball brought him."

"So, the fate of the male pig's feet and the male number two was inherited, and then the basketball team was reorganized, participated in the high school league, won with difficulty, and then went to the national competition and the world league."

"Two people with discordant personalities, in the process of chasing and fighting, become a group of close comrades who can be entrusted with their backs."

When Mo Yi narrated the plot of his imagination, Ying Lili's small mouth behind her had already opened and forgot to close it.

I just came up with the character design of the male pig's feet and the second male, and I haven't conceived the specific plot yet. How could Senior Mo Yi guess his own character design, but I haven't figured out the opening plot yet, how to make the male pig's feet and the second male connected together, and Senior Mo Yi said it.

What's even more frustrating is that after listening to it, I feel that the story should unfold like this.

Senior Mo Yi, tell me quickly, are you secretly hiding in my room and watching me write the outline!

"As expected of Senior Mo Yi, after listening to the beginning, he guessed my thoughts—"

Ying Lili directly borrowed the plot from Mo Yi's story and asked:

"Then senior Mo Yi thinks my story is popular?"

"this--"

Whether it will be popular or not, even Mo Yi is hard to say for sure, because it not only depends on the quality of the work, but also various off-site factors, just like "Slam Dunk", when Mo Yi was still young , super hot, but Mo Yi just couldn't stand it. Compared with the animation of a group of boys sweating and wrestling with each other, Mo Yi preferred the horse monkey shochu that "represents the moon destroying you". I am very envious of Nobi Nobita's "Legend of the Blue Fat Man", and Pishen can't move it. "Pokémon", which can never win the league championship in his life, yes, there are also female high school students who traveled through time and space to the Warring States Period and talked with the dog monster Love, casually save the world "Inuyasha".

Unsure, Mo Yi asked back:

"Naying Lili, what do you think is the selling point of this story? Compared with other comics, what are the bright spots that attract other readers."

"Um(⊙o⊙)..."

Grandpa Mo Yi's rhetorical question really caught Ying Lili's question,

If it is a fan work from before, Ying Lili can naturally answer in the affirmative——cute girls and character designs, a painting style that is trying to cover up, and I want to talk about it, with a little youthful throbbing.

But it was the first time I drew an orthodox manga, and I chose such a sports-themed Eriri. When I conceived this story, I relied on inspiration. , I slapped my head, and suddenly thought of it.

The various character designs and plots in the back are generated with love, wherever you think of it.

In fact, this is the experience of most novice creators. Turning inspiration into a story, where would they think at the beginning, what selling point to attract readers.

After thinking hard for a while, Ying Lili said in a somewhat uncertain tone:

"The friendship between boys, the love for basketball, the conflict and choice between reality and dreams—"

"Well, I also plan to popularize some basketball knowledge when portraying the story."

Grandpa Mo Yi: "..."

This is indeed a very kingly story, but such a kingly story does not know how many are born every day, and in the end it can only depend on the level of the individual.

"There's nothing wrong with the overall structure—"

Grandpa Mo Yi nodded and said:

"But I don't think it's just this way. The details of the game that are too plain may attract readers' interest at the beginning, but once a few games are drawn, it will gradually lose its appeal. After all, a sport like basketball has to be played in person. Only then can you feel the most real joy and sense of expression, and if you read comics, you will soon lose the novelty.”

"Is that so?"

Incompetent in sports, Ying Lili, who has never even shot a basketball and only learned about it by looking up information on the Internet, asked a little nervously:

"Senior Mo Yi, what do you think, how can I remedy this?"

It's hard for me to think of such a serious story, so I can't just give up just because of Senior Mo Yi's saying 'It's not easy to develop later', right?

"Ying Lili, do you know the rules of the basketball game?"

"Um--"

Since she wants to draw basketball cartoons, no matter how sloppy Ying Lili is, she has to figure out the rules, otherwise she will definitely be sprayed to death later.

"That's fine—"

Grandpa Mo Yi suggested:

"It's not easy to draw traditional sports-themed comics in the later stage, but we can add superpower elements to the original foundation without violating the basketball rules."

"Um(⊙o⊙)..."

When Ying Lili thinks about it this way, there is indeed some truth. Adding a set of passionate superpower system, indeed, when describing the plot of the game, there are countless more spaces to write. Unlike basketball, no matter how good you are, it is just a matter of running Go faster, jump better, bump harder.

And with more superpowers, just shooting, there are countless ways to describe it. Right now, Ying Lili thinks of it-the big S shot that turns in the air, the elevator shot that spirals into the sky, and then falls straight down, adding flames to the basketball, Frost, thunder and lightning.Elemental pitches for special effects like storms.

It can be said that this greatly improves the strength and role of the individual, and it is easier to highlight the strength of the male pig's feet.

Most of the readers who like to read blood comics like stories of personal heroism.

However, if the superpowers are too exaggerated, or have no special features, it is easy to turn a story about basketball into a superpower story in which the superpowers are actually bombarded with basketball.

So, Ying Lili told Mo Yi what she thought of.

"It's only natural for you to be so worried—"

After Mo Yi thought of the comic called "Creation Tennis" (New Prince of Tennis), he wanted to complain like this.