I, the Outflow of God, the Wall-breaker of the Reborn Heroines

'Sorry, Xiaoxue, I have something to leave first, you and the president will take this opportunity to get along well and cultivate your relationship...Of course, I don't have any intentions, I just want to be alone for a while , and I don’t want you to worry about me because of this, thereby destroying the current opportunity, so that everyone will not get any benefits, and it will also make everyone feel bad. '

'Well, don't look for me, I will go back after I calm down for a while, I finally gave Xiaoxue your chance, Xiaoxue, you must not waste it in vain, otherwise people will not give Xiaoxue another chance in the future. ..'

'In this way, isn't it a bit like what the president said, 'Let Xiaoxue run 39 meters first, and I can easily chase Xiaoxue with a 40-meter sword'? ——by cute dumpling'

"...This idiot." Yukinoshita Yukino sighed helplessly. After understanding Yuigahama Yui's thoughts, she was both angry and funny, and at the same time a little at a loss...

After all, being alone with Kazuru Kamizuo, with her arrogant character and her wonderful relationship with Kazuru Kamizuo, this is no small challenge for Yukinoshita Yukino.

However, Yukinoshita Yukino finally made up her mind and decided what she should do...

Question 1 about the protagonist's bad mouth and character design (must read)

There are many readers and authors complaining about the protagonist's bad mouth and personality. Regarding these issues, the author has long been mentally prepared...

First of all, there is the issue of the character design of the main character, the outflow of the god. Many readers said that the male protagonist is not like the outflow of the god in the bullet, and his personality is too different. Such a second design cannot be accepted, and even directly asked whether the outflow of the god has watched it. Over projectile.

Regarding this question, the author would like to say that the author has explained this question many times long ago. The outflow of the god in the bullet is just a man-made personality. His essence is actually Hinata Chuang, and the real outflow of the god is Hope's Peak Academy The first generation of founders, there is no record other than that, even the personality is the same...

And the protagonist of the author's book is this unrecorded god, so please base his understanding on the shaping of this book.

In addition, it is also the most important question, that is, the main character's smelly mouth that readers are most dissatisfied with. Why is the protagonist's mouth so smelly?

At the beginning, when the author created the protagonist, there were two versions, one was based on the ruthless god in the projectile, and the other was the stinky god.

Originally, the creation of the main character, God, wanted to choose the former, but the author chose the latter after careful consideration, because the author believes that if you choose the former, then the protagonist is really too perfect, and you can see everything about the heroine directly and then Surrounded by well-liked heroines, living a happy life without shame or impatience every day, there is no need to write at all.

And the latter, that is, the current protagonist with a foul mouth, is the author's protagonist who is more suitable for this story...

The protagonist has a bad mouth because he is as withdrawn as the big teacher. He has a bad mouth to the girls and others just because he uses such an awkward way to refuse others to approach, and this way is very effective, because Ordinary people can't bear it as long as they are slightly stinky from the protagonist's mouth, let alone get close to the protagonist...

And for such a bad-mouthed protagonist, the girls can still be patient and tolerant, which can reflect the depth of the heroine's love for the hero.

In addition, and most importantly, this feature is also an important part of the main line. As the main line of the hero and heroine progresses, the mouth odor of the hero will gradually change. From this point, the male protagonist's change and the theme of the book "growth" are gradually highlighted.

Moreover, the true nature of the hero is more reflected in his subsequent actions towards the heroine. Obviously in his cognition, he is a stranger who has nothing to do with the girls, but he still can't bear to see the girls suffer Just because of the agreement I made verbally, I thought about how to help the heroines get out of the predicament, and even got hit by an out-of-control truck in the back and nearly died...

(The following content is in the next chapter, because there is a charge for a full thousand words)

Question 2 about the protagonist's bad mouth (must read)

As for the problem of mouth odor, it is not only the protagonist, the master teacher and Yukinoshita Yukino in the original work have a mouth odor level that is not inferior to the protagonist...

Not to mention other things, just the big teacher directly bitch to the dumpling he just met, Yukinoshita Yukino directly treated the disgusting cockroaches to the big teacher who just met, no matter what it is For the protagonist, it is even more excessive.

But readers will basically not realize this, because readers know that this is caused by the characters of the teacher and Yukinoshita Yukino, and it should be regarded as not malicious in itself, or even the so-called cuteness, while the anime The expressive technique of the movie has also been greatly optimized for such a situation, especially in the development of the plot later, so it adds a lot of points to the shaping of the characters.

Readers, however, would like to slap him to death for the protagonist of a similar book, because the novel itself is a description of words, not only can't add cuteness to such a bad mouth, it will only greatly reduce the protagonist's score...

Not to mention other things, if the words said by the protagonist of this book were put on the big teacher or Yukino Yukino in the anime, then everyone would definitely not have such a reaction, and even watched this scene with a cheerful smile, thinking that It is caused by the teacher's xenophobic psychology, or Yukinoshita Yukino's cuteness of her poisonous tongue, the two of them bickering are really interesting.

Of course, even if the author explains it this way, there must be many people who cannot accept it, and the author has already expected this...

However, the author still created such a bad-mouthed protagonist, although such a protagonist will indeed dissuade many readers, causing many readers to complain about the protagonist and the author and then abandon the book.

But the author is still a student, and he is not under such great financial pressure. He is still innocent in his heart, so what he wants to write is the story in his heart, and what he wants to write is the protagonists in his heart. Poor, even if you can't make a lot of money, the author still wrote it down like this.

Because what the author wants to write is not a story about the protagonist Long Aotian who is omnipotent and the heroine who has a good start and directly delivers dog food to the door and falls in love. What he wants to write is a story about a flawed protagonist and immature heroines. The growing youth story, I want to write a story like clannad that can bring people to think about life.

Maybe the author's idea is naive, naive, ridiculous, even stupid and arrogant. There are many flaws in this book, but the author will do his best to write this book well...

To be honest, the author of this book has actually given up a long time ago, because the author is very busy now, and now it is because of various messy reasons such as Kawen. He has no time to write this book until early in the morning every day, and he stays up late every day. , the body felt overwhelmed for a while, and the results of this book were so unsatisfactory.

It's just that the author still gritted his teeth and persisted, and never stopped changing it, because the author wanted to finish writing this story in his heart, and finish writing this growth story about youth campus.

So, if there are readers who like this book a lot, please be sure to read the back and see the transformation of the protagonists and heroines of this book...

Chapter 450 Seven alone date with Yukinoshita Yukino? (one more)

"That guy, Tuanzi, I thought she really fell into the toilet, but I didn't expect that he sneaked away and made us wait for her here for half an hour like a erha."

Seeing the text message sent by Yui Hihama Yui in Yukinoshita Yukino's hand, Kamizuo was angry and funny, but the most in his heart was helplessness...

Of course he knows that the current Yuigahama Yui obviously has a big fluctuation in his heart after listening to Kazuru's previous speech. In order to avoid such a weak side being seen by Kazuru, Yuigahama Yui chose to be silent I sneaked away first, and even gave up the opportunity to Yukino Yukino...

Regarding this, Shenzuo Chuliu didn't know what to say. After all, he was not the type who was good at dealing with girls. He had never thought that he would date girls before, and he would consider every major life event that ordinary people would consider. .. Not to mention, the current situation is not an easy level to solve.

"So, where are we going to go next? Should we go back and find Tuanzi and ask her clearly, or should we listen to Tuanzi's suggestion, and just continue with the play plan after the two of us go on alone?"

Scratching his head in distress, Kamizuo immediately sighed helplessly, and asked Yukinoshita Yukino who was staring at the phone screen expressionlessly, as if there was so much attractive content on it.

"...Well, let's go back and ask Yuigahama first... No, it's okay, since we've come here, let's continue to wander around according to the previous plan, otherwise Hiratsuka-sensei will not be able to explain. "

At the beginning, Yukinoshita Yukino did not hesitate to go back to find Yuigahama Yui so as to avoid being alone with Kamizuru, but she suddenly changed her words very bluntly in the middle, and even made a lame excuse because of it .

"..." Shen Zuo, who was keenly aware of this, smiled and said nothing, not only did not expose it, but gave a big step:

"Well, that's true. Even if we go back now, it will take a lot of time, and I'm afraid it will be troublesome to find the hiding group. The most important thing is, if all the members of our group are silent like this It’s hard to hold back that quiet and cute face, so why not continue playing, this is the most correct and meaningful thing.”

"It's true, it's rare that your perverted cockroach-like head can have such rational thoughts..." Yukinoshita Yukino replied absent-mindedly.

"Then let's go, I remember the next plan is to go there..."

For Yukinoshita Yukino's poisonous tongue and absent-mindedness, Shenzuo didn't pay much attention to it, because anyone with a discerning eye can see that Yukinoshita Yukino is very nervous now, even if the other party tries to hide his nervousness as much as possible, but the tightness His delicate body, stiff expression and even some uncoordinated stiff movements all illustrate this point...

Why did Yukinoshita Yukino do this? God Zuo Chuliu knew the reason, so he just cooperated with the other party and kept a safe distance from Yukinoshita Yukino's pace.

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