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End of this testimonial!
It's over, I still have to write a testimonial!
First of all, I would like to thank the author's editor, Big Y, if he hadn't given the lottery and recommendation, there would be no book, thank you!
Next, I would like to thank the readers who have subscribed to this book, voted, and read this book, thank you here!
I hardly ask readers to give rewards or anything like that. In my opinion, subscribing is the best encouragement for me!
Another reason is that in the author circle of the starting point, the rewards seem to be added...
As a lazy person, Jiageng is really frustrating, okay!
Of course, for anyone who rewards more than 500 starting coins, even if I scratch my head the next day, I will add more...
Well, that is to say, just subscribe, don't tip! !
Let's talk about this book.
Mengxin doesn't know what to say, the first time is inevitably a little nervous...
Let’s use what I said before, it’s a success if it can be finished, if there is no pigeon, it’s over hahaha!
As I said before, this book actually intends to open other worlds in the middle, and the righteous horror avatar is prepared for this, but it is a pity that I did not follow the outline because of the grades.
I also saw some readers suggested that other worlds can be opened after the end of Pirates, otherwise the origin of the system and Yunye is not explained clearly, it is considered unfinished...
I don't know what to say about this point, the beholder has a different opinion, whether it is unfinished or not, you have the final say.
I myself don't think it's unfinished, because the pirates have filled all the buried pits here (if there are still unfilled pits, it is probably not important), and it also gives the final battle, Im's final Purpose explained...
Everything that can be explained has been explained, whether it is reasonable or not depends on the understanding of the readers!
There are more than 200 follow-up readings of this book in 24 hours, thank you in advance!
Except for a reader who greatly mentioned the origin of the beads and the protagonist, no one said it was unfinished.
Maybe it's because most of the readers don't like comments. You can tell from the dozens of comments in the comment area...
I almost never delete comments other than ads, but only a few dozen...
Although it does leave a bit of suspense in this regard, it has already been mentioned, that is, that bead is the "origin" of the world of death, so let's treat it as an open ending!
Or see if you can explain it in the next book~~
Back to the topic.
That is related to combat power. Well, apart from someone mentioning this point earlier, it is also because the ability to solve various Zanpakuto and the ability to break the way has not reached the strength in their minds. No one mentioned the topic of the collapse of combat power. Thinking about the arrangement in terms of combat power, it should be passable, right?
There are also those who say that the increase in combat power is too fast, and some who say that it is slow... (scratches head)
After all, comparing combat power in different worlds is just playing hooligans. I think I can handle this well, um, I feel like myself. (guilt)
Another point is that the plot of Vinsmoke in the early stage, now it seems that there is indeed a problem. It would be more reasonable to take a few hits before subduing it. Standing at attention and being beaten)
As for why the unemotional sons of Vinsmoke are afraid of the protagonist, this point was also patched later. Like those giant sea kings, their souls with incomplete emotions are different from others, so they can more or less detect the soul of the protagonist The exception is a patch.
Another thing that is a little controversial is the plot on Uta's side. Some people think that the resurrection of the dead through the dream world is a bit ridiculous, and they even find it inexplicable.
At that time, a reader who kept following up and often left behind this chapter mentioned it a lot, saying something messy...
Because of my guilty conscience, I didn't dare to reply, so I apologize here, hahaha.
But I don’t think that part of the plot is unreasonable, and there are explanations. Anyway, devil fruit is something unreasonable. It’s still a matter of opinion. It’s impossible for everyone to like every plot.
To make a digression, the resurrection of the dead was originally intended to use Im's ability, the fruit of life, which can use the [Seed of Life] to temporarily resurrect the former strong, and the ability to compete with the Remnant Sword. To revive the undead who died under the sword is to make the scene bigger in the final battle.
But after thinking about it later, it was too much of a slash to solve the remaining fire, and it would be too nonsense to match the combat power!
From the beginning, Liu Ren Ruo Huo was written too strong, and the first solution can overwhelm the general, with a proficiency of 100 swastikas, if it is unreasonable to not be able to crush it, it will be changed.
Here, the swastika of the Remnant Fire Taidao has a proficiency of 80, which is the ability to destroy the world when compared to Mr. Yamamoto who was a thousand years ago with a proficiency of 100.
Although Mr. Yamamoto was strong thousands of years ago, the temperature of the flame did not reach the level enough to destroy the world, which was mentioned in the original book of Death.
Thousands of years ago, it was called [Sword of Great Fire]?
As for the ability of the Quincy Master, I didn’t write it out, because most of them are based on laws. Putting it in the world of Pirates, which focuses on physique, ability, and hand-to-hand combat, is a bit too inconsistent, and I feel that if I don’t have this ability to write well, there will be no Write it down.
There is also why you didn’t write Blackbeard dead from the beginning. This was originally foreshadowed. The predecessor of the Dark Fruit, the Black Hole Fruit, was set in this way. I originally wanted Blackbeard to explode in the later stage, but I saw some Many people didn't like him, so they asked him to leave the stage early...
Fortunately, it did not have much impact on the outline, and it has been walking along a line.
Another point, some readers have mentioned that in the early stage, it looks like you are reading fantasy, and some terms are also set in fantasy. I also realized that I also paid attention to it when I wrote it later. It should be changed to some extent, right?
I don't really see it myself, if there is any change, please tell me and give me some confidence...
Well, there is nothing more to say, so thank you again to all the readers who have subscribed to this book!
Special thanks to the readers who have been following the votes. Although this book has many flaws, I am honored to let you keep reading. Thank you very much! !
PS: The next book has already passed internal voting. If you still like my style of pretending to be fanfiction, please bookmark it when the book is released!
It’s Hokage Doujin, changing the set without changing the medicine, anyway, it’s a different world, but one book is finished, maybe the next one will have better experience and better writing?
This is uncertain, hahaha, Mengxin is always trembling.
But it’s still the same sentence, as long as the minimum requirements are met, if you order more than five hundred, you will not be a eunuch, and you will keep writing.
After a few days or ten days of rest, the book will be issued, and the outline will be prepared first.
Well, that's it, tomorrow weekend, I wish readers a happy weekend!
See you next book!
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