[Douluo] Please give me one-half of Ning Rongrong

As a qualified fanfiction writer, when I write fanfiction, I will dutifully read the original work, figure out the characteristics of the characters, and analyze the plot of the original work.

The same is true for the colleagues of Douluo Dalu.

However, until now, I have been hovering on the cliff of giving up updating countless times.

The original is really disgusting.

Just talking about the part of the relationship between Bai Chenxiang and Ma Hongjun in the later stage, I can't say anything except "off a big spectrum" and "a big trough".

To give a few examples -

1. When Ma Hongjun was pursuing Bai Chenxiang in the Min Zhi Clan, this buddy went directly to Bai He to propose marriage.Bai He actually agreed.I don't understand - one of these two people is willing to marry the other, or can they get married?Zhou Yu beat Huang Gai, what does this have to do with Bai Chenxiang?Is that why Bai He loves his only granddaughter so much?Is this how Ma Hongjun pursues the girl he really likes?

2. On the way, Bai Chenxiang and Ma Hongjun had a conflict, and Dai Mubai was unhappy at the time. The original text said, "What are you, why do you look down on fat people? What's wrong with fat people?" It's a dirty word, I don't understand where Dai Mubai even said this, Ma Hongjun is so good, you give Zhu Zhuqing to him!Why are you so angry at Bai Chenxiang!Ma Hongjun likes Bai Chenxiang, so does Bai Chenxiang have to like Ma Hongjun?What robber logic is this!

3. At this same place, Ma Hongjun brought food to Bai Chenxiang, but Bai Chenxiang suddenly jumped into Ma Hongjun's arms because Bai Chenxiang was afraid of mice.Lying in a big trough!The Soul Sect of the Four Rings went to the world and was afraid of mice!Then why is this damn fighting, if the opponent is a mouse Wuhun, why don't you just let your legs go soft? !

4. Later Ma Hongjun was seriously injured when beating that werewolf, Bai Chenxiang immediately felt distressed and wanted to bandage him.But Tang San refused, saying that the wound was too big to be stitched up.But he didn't sew by himself, so he asked Bai Chenxiang if she could, saying that he had expended too much energy fighting by himself, and now he was a bit powerless, only Bai Chenxiang could do it.If it wasn't for the forced pairing, there would be no other reason at all, so if you didn't bring Bai Chenxiang with you along the way, then Ma Hongjun would surely die?I believed your evil? !

5. Then, the group arrived at the city of the sea soul master and said they wanted to find a hotel to rest for the night.Their allocation of rooms is like this, Dai Mubai and Zhu Zhuqing will share a room, Ning Rongrong will take care of Xiao Wu, Oscar will make do with Tang San, and finally they come to the conclusion that Bai Chenxiang and Ma Hongjun will live in a room house.I just looked at this page and flipped forward four or five times, but I didn’t see him saying that there were only four rooms left in this hotel——I was thinking, since there are not no spare rooms, why should I choose the hotel? Let them share a room?Even if there is really no spare room, can the three brothers Ma Hongjun, Tang San and Oscar make do in the same room for one night?Besides, if you don't want to wrong the three of them, can Bai Chenxiang, Ning Rongrong and Xiaowu make do in one room for one night?Hey, he won't, he will write such a plot.I don't know the meaning of this plot. It neither highlights Bai Chenxiang's character, nor makes people believe how sincere Ma Hongjun is. I only see the Seven Shrek Monsters headed by Tang San, coordinating their bad deeds The spotted Ma Hongjun almost forced Bai Chenxiang to follow Ma Hongjun.What made me speechless the most was that I followed this side and turned the two sides back, and there was a line of words [Finally opened another room].This means that there are extra rooms in this hotel, and it is obvious that Bai Chenxiang and Ma Hongjun can each live in a room, and there is no hidden danger in safety—then I will ask again, what is the purpose of arranging this plot? What?To disgust me?

Not to mention whether Bai Chenxiang really likes Ma Hongjun, even if he does, as long as Ma Hongjun has the slightest respect for this girl, he can't make a joke about it.As long as the Seven Shrek Monsters regard Bai Chenxiang as a person, they can't do things like snubbing Bai Chenxiang or forcibly matching Bai Chenxiang and Ma Hongjun.

Tang San is Bai Chenxiang's cousin!Bai He guarded the crystal blood dragon ginseng like a treasure, he himself was reluctant to eat it, and he was also reluctant to give it to Bai Chenxiang, so he gave it to Tang San directly, and then Xiao Wu ate it, and then Xiao Wu turned into a human form.Since the book emphasizes how much Tang San's feelings for Xiao Wu are stronger than Jin Jian, let me say that Bai He is kind to Tang San, isn't it too much?

You, Tang San, are you doing this to your own cousin, the granddaughter of your lover's benefactor?

I vaguely remember Tang San said to Bai Chenxiang [Don't worry, I will make the decision for you], he said that he would definitely not let Bai Chenxiang suffer from Ma Hongjun.

But all of you who have eyes and brains, go and read the series of descriptions that follow.

Nothing happened yet, Bai Chenxiang was first ignored and then persecuted.If this really happened, would you say that Tang San chose Ma Hongjun who came out of a school to practice and compete together and went through life and death together, or did he choose the completely unfamiliar cousin Bai Chenxiang whom he met suddenly and had no background at all?

Just like this, when Tang San asked Bai He why he agreed to Ma Hongjun's marriage proposal, he said [No matter how bad it is, there is still him, he will never let Bai Chenxiang suffer].Farewell brother, without you Tang San protecting her, Bai Chenxiang and the crystal blood dragon ginseng in her family can live a decent life for more than 20 years.With you protecting her, in the end, she just sold herself to Ma Hongjun, and you protect her like this?

Why do I want to give up this fandom countless times, it is its original work, I really feel sick after reading it for a while, and I feel sick again after watching it for a while, I can't wait to yue out my intestines!

After seeing so many things done by the protagonist group headed by Tang San, I wanted to write a fan and let my protagonist teach them how to behave.

So I wrote this fanfic.

But writing a fanfic means that you can’t rely on enthusiasm. In the future, you will carefully dismantle the various loopholes in the original work and the places that can change the plot, and analyze the characters. Although there are many hooks for the characters, it is not directly It wiped out Tang San day by day.

In the process of repeatedly opening the original book, I really felt disgusted. How could there be such a disgusting original book?When I wrote The Legend of Zhen Huan, I just thought about how to untie the thread I buried, but when I wrote the Douluo fan, I felt disgusted countless times!My heart is moving, I really want to give up, I just want the book Douluo Continent to get out of my world and out of my sight, why are you writing fandom?Teach them how to be human, I was almost taught how to be a human being by the third young master of the Tang family, even if the gods came, they couldn’t save him!

So I would like to ask everyone very seriously, seriously, should I continue to write?

too difficult.

It's really hard.