Cute girl Pokémon Tang Yi

Time flickers.

More than ten days passed quickly.

During this period, Tang Yi has been busy revising the outline for Chilulian, and the two of them would have heated discussions from time to time. The girl still complained about Tang Yi's revised outline.

In the outline revised by Tang Yi.

The protagonist is still Guisi. Since Guisi was abandoned, she awakened the golden finger system, which gave her the ability to sneak into other people's dreams. At the beginning, the system level was very low, and she could only sneak into the dreams of those weak creatures.

With continuous upgrading, the system unlocks more and more abilities, not only can sneak into the dreams of powerful creatures, but also sanction others in the dreams.

The first time the ghost girl used her ability was on the trainer who abandoned herself. In the dream she created, the badass trainer was tortured by his conscience. After waking up, he could not escape the inner torture and surrendered himself. up.

The ghost girl realized how powerful her ability is, so she wanted to help more people like herself who had resentment but could not get it done.

After that, she created a website, which is very simple, mainly for everyone to express and vent their dissatisfaction and resentment.

And Guisi would screen other people's messages every once in a while, and personally confirm whether it really existed. If it was confirmed to be true, she would execute her own justice by entering a dream.

Because the ghost girl's dream ability works best at midnight, she usually chooses to sneak into the suspect's dream after midnight.

At the very beginning, very few people knew about this website, and those who found it occasionally thought it was a prank, some left dismissively, and some jokingly left comments on it.

But as time went by, the messages occasionally contained a few pieces of real information.

The first piece of real information came from a girl from the local orphanage. The management of this orphanage is relatively chaotic, and there is almost no monitoring. As a result, bullying in the institution is very common.

Because this horned goldfish girl is usually taciturn and suffers from bullying, even when she falls asleep at night, she will be forcibly dragged up, dragged to the toilet, and bullied in various heinous ways.

The girl complained and went to the manager, but she heard nothing from her. Instead, she got even more bullying.

By chance, she found out about this website. She didn't believe it at first. She just left a message on it with an accusatory mentality to vent her grievances and resentments.

The ghost girl quickly found out about this orphanage, and after a few days of careful investigation, she confirmed that the incident was true, so that night, she first sneaked into the dream of the boss of the bullying gang, the fiery monkey girl.

In the dream, Fiery Monkey was thrown into a bizarre world, just like how she used to treat those weak and pitiful people, she experienced the same torture-like bullying.

The repeated cycle of reincarnation made life worse than death. In the end, her psychology completely collapsed.

After waking up again, the fiery monkey girl was like a lunatic, in front of everyone in the orphanage, crying about what she had done in the past, kowtowing and apologizing, while desperately slapping herself, and even revealed that she had colluded with the administrators of the orphanage. It is domineering inside.

This incident quickly made local news headlines, and relevant departments quickly intervened, removing the director of the orphanage and related personnel from their posts and investigating.

Life in the orphanage finally returned to peace.

Finally, the horned goldfish girl no longer has to endure bullying. Although everyone else is wondering why the hot monkey suddenly found out about his conscience, only horned goldfish knows what happened.

She went on the site again and thanked her from the bottom of her heart.

Gradually, there are more and more incidents like this.

I don’t know when it started, but this urban legend has spread more and more widely, and this mysterious website has begun to be called hell communication.

If you do something evil, you have to worry about the vengeance from hell.

The ghost girl has gradually become the legendary justice girl, and some people call her the hell girl.

……

Tang Yi's outline is only written until the end of the first story line.

Kirulian has some complaints about the settings. For example, she can't accept the golden finger system, but Tang Yi patiently explained to her the commercial nature. In order to cater to a wider audience, adding a system, not only written It is convenient and easy to watch.

Well, the girl reluctantly accepted.

Then there is the story. In fact, Kirulian still likes this kind of story, but he also has different opinions on how to deal with the villain.

Originally, according to Tang Yi's original intention, after the villain received retribution, he could just receive the boxed lunch.

Kirulian couldn't accept this ending, thinking it was still too dark.

The girl still firmly believes that there are more good people in this world after all.

Therefore, the ending of the villain was changed to: conscience was condemned, he took the initiative to repent, surrendered, and accepted legal sanctions.

"I think it's pretty good." After the second revision, Kirulian thought it was pretty good, and her trainer was indeed talented.

Mainly after experiencing the events of Ugly Fish and Su Chengtao, Chilulian gradually understood that the dark side of this society may be much greater than she imagined.

Although the setting was messed up by Tang Yi, the basic idea was still Chilulian's own idea. In reality, she may not be able to do more. At least in the novel, she can use her own pen to shape the character. a world in your own mind.

"But if the story is a bit depressing, I'm afraid readers won't be able to accept it." The girl was still worried.

Tang Yi was actually not sure whether the online readers in this world could accept such a story, so he comforted the girl and said: "It's okay. I don't expect to make money with my first book. It doesn't matter even if I fail, I will support you!"

The prize money of tens of thousands of yuan in the trials had already been cashed out, and when he had money, Tang Yi's words were domineering.

Of course, half of the bonus was given to Kirulian.

To be precise, girls are not short of money now.

But, the words "I'll support you" made Kirulian feel flattered.

It will take some time to rewrite according to the revised outline. As for how to write and how to portray the characters, that is Kirulian's own business.

In this regard, Tang Yi does not intend to do it for him.

Although if he were to ghostwrite, at least the writing would definitely be better than the girl's cyan writing style, but this is Qilulian's novel, not Tang Yi's.

After all, she is already a mature elf girl, and it is time for her to learn to make money to support her family.

At this time, the college entrance examination scores were finally announced.