Cute girl Pokémon Tang Yi

There are also many novel websites on the Internet in this world, and the quality is uneven. Tang Yi didn't have time to study this professionally before. Compared with those self-boasting advertisements on Baidu on the Internet, it is better to find a reliable person to understand.

"But what does this have to do with Ghost Stone?" Tang Yi was still wondering.

Qilu Lian stared complainingly. Why is this person like a curious baby, insisting on getting to the bottom of it, but he still replied: "Because the protagonist of my new book is a ghost girl."

Tang Yi suddenly became interested: "Have you saved the manuscript? Can you show it to me?"

"No! I won't show it to you!" Kirulian didn't show it this time.

Sure enough, the girl had quietly written the opening chapter herself.

It should be during the period from the end of the selection competition to the college entrance examination. Although the girls will be responsible for supervising Tang Yi's study at night, Tang Yi is at school during the day, and Kirulian is fine at home.

Originally, Tang Yi was worried that the girl would be bored during the day, but now it seems that the original time was used to conceive and write novels.

But why not show it to yourself?

It's not like I haven't seen it before.

Tang Yi was suspicious and even became vigilant: "Could it be that you are writing a novel about Danmei or Lily? This is not acceptable. According to the recent news, the relevant departments are going to start cracking down on this content. You can't hit the gun. "

"What are Danmei and Baihe?" The girl blinked her big innocent eyes.

"Ahem, it's just men with men, women with women, that kind of thing." Tang Yi reminded tactfully.

The girl was startled for a moment, then she realized what she was doing, her pretty face turned red: "Why do you think about these dirty things all day long? How could I write such things! Oh, no, no, no, you told me, now I feel Kind of disgusting."

With the girl's imagination ability, after Tang Yi said one sentence, God knows how many pictures she had already imagined in her mind. After a while, the girl ran to the toilet, and she could vaguely hear the sound of slight vomiting.

After Chilulian finished vomiting, Tang Yi said angrily: "Okay, I made a mistake. Since I didn't write these things, why didn't you show them to me?"

The more Kirulian hid, the more curious Tang Yi became.

"You'll know when I post it."

"I don't have the privilege to see it in advance."

"no!"

"Why?" Tang Yi didn't give up.

"I don't write well. You will probably say something about me after reading it."

"It's okay, you're a novice. It's normal to write poorly. What's more, if you really want to publish on the Internet, you must be aware of being evaluated." Tang Yi said seriously.

"It seems to be." Kirulian frowned and thought for a while, and felt that what he said was indeed reasonable.

The girl still believed in Tang Yi's level, but she was just not confident.

After hesitating for a while, Kirulian let go: "Okay, then, take a look, don't say too much."

"Don't worry, my Kirulian is the best, how can I say you?" Tang Yi happily got his wish.

The file is placed in a folder that is not commonly used, and the name of the file is "Learning Materials". In order to deceive people, the girl took great pains.

Open the document, my dear, it has more than 50,000 words.

Unexpectedly, Chirulian managed to save so many manuscripts without saying a word.

The title of the book is in the document, and it's called: The Adventures of Ghost.

Tang Yi shook his head subconsciously: "The title of the book is too common, and there is no desire for people to click on it. You have to change it."

Kirulian curled her lips and gave a noncommittal grace.

Keep looking down.

The idea of ​​the whole story is roughly: a ghost girl, who was abandoned when she was just born, wanders alone in the human city, because the girl has the ability to enter dreams, and she learns about the real inner world of others by constantly sneaking into other people's dreams , For example, a person who looks good is actually a big villain in his heart, and a person who looks ugly is actually a kind person.

In this way, the ghost girl constantly encountered all kinds of humans or elves on the road of wandering.

The -word manuscript was quickly read.

After reading it, Tang Yi was not in a hurry to evaluate, but was thinking about it.

Kirulian waited anxiously, and finally couldn't help but said angrily: "What are you talking about, sighing and shaking your head, what do you mean?"

Tang Yi cleared his throat: "On the whole, although the writing is fluent, the language is fluent, and the words are accurate..."

Kirulian heard the smell and interrupted him: "Okay, let's just talk about the but part."

"Well, but first of all, the story has no highlights, nothing too attractive, the main line is very vague, the characters are not very clear, and the sense of substitution is not strong..."

Kirulian's face immediately turned a little ugly, and said angrily: "Hmph! I don't know who said it just now, let's not talk about mine."

Tang Yi scratched his head: "Uh, did I say anything?"

The girl said angrily, "The puppy said it!"

"Wang Wang Wang!"

Qi Lulian was speechless, and was shocked again by Tang Yi's shamelessness.

Tang Yi laughed, and his expression became a little serious: "Well, to be serious, I'm still very euphemistic. If you post this on the Internet, the keyboard man will definitely rant even worse. After all, there is a big Internet, they won’t know that the writer of the novel is actually a beautiful girl, you have to be mentally prepared.”

Quietly exaggerated, Kirulian's face was indeed much softer.

The girl still couldn't help boasting.

"Is that so? Then, how can I modify it?" Chilulian calmed down and decided to follow the good advice. She felt that Tang Yi knew more than herself in this regard.

Tang Yi waved his hand: "There is nothing to change! My suggestion is to rewrite! Come on, let me make an outline for you."

"But..." Kirulian hesitated.

Tang Yi knew what she was worried about: "Don't worry, the core of the story is still you. I just help you package this story properly so that it can better suit the tastes of online readers. How to write it is still up to you."

"Well, then, please help me make an outline."

Kirulian thinks it's okay too.

Anyway, the college entrance examination is over, and it's boring to be idle. It's just like playing around a few days ago. In fact, this small city doesn't have many places to go.

It’s not bad to study and write novels at home.

Tang Yi couldn't help it. It was probably a habit he developed when he was a child. Now Chilulian's otaku attributes are getting stronger and stronger. The girl doesn't like to go out to play, but her interest in novels is getting stronger.

I was afraid that the pure-hearted Kirulian would not be able to stand the keyboard man's spouting. As for the grades, Tang Yi didn't care.

The first book is for Kirulian to practice her skills.