angel in comics
64. The boat of friendship can capsize at any time~
"Ah!" Li Zhen stretched and moved his muscles: "OK, it took me some time to finally read through the works you created before! If they can still be called works."
"Is there any problem?" Kavin asked doubtfully.
"Oh, that's a big problem!" Li Zhen looked at Kavin with strange eyes: "Now I want to know who gave you the courage to write a novel? Is it the identity of God? Hey, Kavin, tell me about the novel. What are the three elements?”
Just as Kavin was about to speak, Li Zhen stopped him directly: "Don't use your God's power to search for answers! Tell me frankly!"
"Well, I don't know." Kavin hesitated and said.
"The three elements of a novel are characters, plot, and environment! Then let's take a look at your work! First of all, the characters: the Wen family's twin evil spirits are vividly described, which is no problem. The environment: human world, heaven, purgatory, and hell! Write it! It’s not bad either.”
"Thank you for the compliment." Kavin happily accepted Li Zhen's praise.
"Then please tell me, how did you write the plot so poorly?" Li Zhen threw the book in his hand in front of Calvin.
Calvin was a little stunned: "Is it really that bad?"
"Haha." Li Zhen sneered: "You know? Before I read the book you wrote, I always thought that the Internet writer named Cai in the world I lived in was bad enough! Since I read your book After reading the book, I realized that I owed him an apology!”
("Sneeze!" A handsome guy from a certain world sneezed hard.)
"Then what do you think I should do?" Kavin was also a little angry. I'm God!Can you give me some face?
"Let's talk first, I'm just making suggestions. No need to be angry~" Li Zhen poured himself a glass of wine leisurely, ignored Calvin's angry eyes and continued: "Maybe you didn't find the point!"
"What do you mean?" Kavin asked with a frown.
"Just like the chapters you wrote about Kavin, that is, your human identity. Don't you think you spent too much pen and ink? You just squeezed out the chapters that people are interested in!" Li Zhen closed the book. Turn to the chapter where Kavin just appeared.
"For example?" Kavin asked.
"For example, Archangel Lucifer, you wrote a few fragments here! Shouldn't you say a few more words?"
"What does he have to say?" Kavin said in a low tone.
"You know, the greatness of every hero or villain is defined by their opponents! And here, you neither wrote how Lucifer fell nor how you punished him! You... ....”
"Change the topic, I don't want to talk about him." Kavin interrupted Li Zhen directly.
"Okay, you are God." Li Zhen shrugged indifferently.
"Then let's talk about these new chapters you wrote. Cassidio wants to replace your identity and become the new God! For this reason, he opened the door to purgatory and absorbed countless souls in purgatory. Use powerful power to kill Raphael is dead, and he even wants to kill all the angels! Well, I'm curious, are you not angry at all?" Li Zhen picked up Calvin's new draft, took a look at it and asked curiously.
"Believe me, he will get the punishment he deserves!" Kavin smiled mysteriously and said, "Keep watching."
"God was so angry that he sent his closest angel to earth to protect all the angels, and asked him to stop Cassidio. What the hell is this?" Li Zhen continued to read, but found that the following chapters had a big difference with his memory. different!
"Oh~ I forgot to write, the closest angel to God is named 'Kyle'!"
Kavin smiled and said words that surprised Li Zhen. Li Zhen just wanted to say something.Kavin quickly reached out and snapped his fingers, teleporting Li Zhen out!
"Hmph! Let you slander my work! The chapters about me must be well described. How can Lucifer be as important as me?" During the transmission, Li Zhen vaguely heard Calvin's slightly arrogant voice.
The boat of friendship is about to capsize!Facts have proved that it is not only women who fall out faster than turning the pages of books, but also God!
In a beautiful forest in the world, Cassidio, who had gained great power, was walking on the lawn with a confident smile on his face.As he walked, he said:
"I think you should understand that if you continue to resist me, I will definitely punish you. Moreover, you will have nowhere to hide! Our father has been away for a long time. I once thought that what we need is free will! But now I Then I realized that you just need a new strong leader! You need a new father!"
He stopped and looked at the few angels left in front of him and said firmly: "Now, I am your father! You must be obedient, otherwise, this will be your fate!"
As he looked from his perspective, corpses of various shapes fell on the beautiful lawn!These corpses include men and women, old and young, but they have one thing in common, that is, behind each of them is a pair of wings that have been burnt to ashes!
"Get ready to welcome the new era!" Cassidio opened his hands, as if embracing the new world!But what he held in his arms was a figure that looked familiar to him!
"Sorry to interrupt. I don't like men! If you need it, I suggest you go find your arrogant cute pet, Dean."
"Is there any problem?" Kavin asked doubtfully.
"Oh, that's a big problem!" Li Zhen looked at Kavin with strange eyes: "Now I want to know who gave you the courage to write a novel? Is it the identity of God? Hey, Kavin, tell me about the novel. What are the three elements?”
Just as Kavin was about to speak, Li Zhen stopped him directly: "Don't use your God's power to search for answers! Tell me frankly!"
"Well, I don't know." Kavin hesitated and said.
"The three elements of a novel are characters, plot, and environment! Then let's take a look at your work! First of all, the characters: the Wen family's twin evil spirits are vividly described, which is no problem. The environment: human world, heaven, purgatory, and hell! Write it! It’s not bad either.”
"Thank you for the compliment." Kavin happily accepted Li Zhen's praise.
"Then please tell me, how did you write the plot so poorly?" Li Zhen threw the book in his hand in front of Calvin.
Calvin was a little stunned: "Is it really that bad?"
"Haha." Li Zhen sneered: "You know? Before I read the book you wrote, I always thought that the Internet writer named Cai in the world I lived in was bad enough! Since I read your book After reading the book, I realized that I owed him an apology!”
("Sneeze!" A handsome guy from a certain world sneezed hard.)
"Then what do you think I should do?" Kavin was also a little angry. I'm God!Can you give me some face?
"Let's talk first, I'm just making suggestions. No need to be angry~" Li Zhen poured himself a glass of wine leisurely, ignored Calvin's angry eyes and continued: "Maybe you didn't find the point!"
"What do you mean?" Kavin asked with a frown.
"Just like the chapters you wrote about Kavin, that is, your human identity. Don't you think you spent too much pen and ink? You just squeezed out the chapters that people are interested in!" Li Zhen closed the book. Turn to the chapter where Kavin just appeared.
"For example?" Kavin asked.
"For example, Archangel Lucifer, you wrote a few fragments here! Shouldn't you say a few more words?"
"What does he have to say?" Kavin said in a low tone.
"You know, the greatness of every hero or villain is defined by their opponents! And here, you neither wrote how Lucifer fell nor how you punished him! You... ....”
"Change the topic, I don't want to talk about him." Kavin interrupted Li Zhen directly.
"Okay, you are God." Li Zhen shrugged indifferently.
"Then let's talk about these new chapters you wrote. Cassidio wants to replace your identity and become the new God! For this reason, he opened the door to purgatory and absorbed countless souls in purgatory. Use powerful power to kill Raphael is dead, and he even wants to kill all the angels! Well, I'm curious, are you not angry at all?" Li Zhen picked up Calvin's new draft, took a look at it and asked curiously.
"Believe me, he will get the punishment he deserves!" Kavin smiled mysteriously and said, "Keep watching."
"God was so angry that he sent his closest angel to earth to protect all the angels, and asked him to stop Cassidio. What the hell is this?" Li Zhen continued to read, but found that the following chapters had a big difference with his memory. different!
"Oh~ I forgot to write, the closest angel to God is named 'Kyle'!"
Kavin smiled and said words that surprised Li Zhen. Li Zhen just wanted to say something.Kavin quickly reached out and snapped his fingers, teleporting Li Zhen out!
"Hmph! Let you slander my work! The chapters about me must be well described. How can Lucifer be as important as me?" During the transmission, Li Zhen vaguely heard Calvin's slightly arrogant voice.
The boat of friendship is about to capsize!Facts have proved that it is not only women who fall out faster than turning the pages of books, but also God!
In a beautiful forest in the world, Cassidio, who had gained great power, was walking on the lawn with a confident smile on his face.As he walked, he said:
"I think you should understand that if you continue to resist me, I will definitely punish you. Moreover, you will have nowhere to hide! Our father has been away for a long time. I once thought that what we need is free will! But now I Then I realized that you just need a new strong leader! You need a new father!"
He stopped and looked at the few angels left in front of him and said firmly: "Now, I am your father! You must be obedient, otherwise, this will be your fate!"
As he looked from his perspective, corpses of various shapes fell on the beautiful lawn!These corpses include men and women, old and young, but they have one thing in common, that is, behind each of them is a pair of wings that have been burnt to ashes!
"Get ready to welcome the new era!" Cassidio opened his hands, as if embracing the new world!But what he held in his arms was a figure that looked familiar to him!
"Sorry to interrupt. I don't like men! If you need it, I suggest you go find your arrogant cute pet, Dean."
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