I'm In Pokemon: Movie With Touko at the Start

Chapter 5: Perfecting the script

Although he and Tou Zi worked together to improve the script, in fact, Tou Zi couldn't help much. Whether it was the plot or the dialogue, it was Shen Yun who solved it by himself. Just a grasp.

After all, Shen Yun's anti-poison ability far exceeds the anti-poison ability of people in the Pokémon world. For example, in the script, Shen Yun thinks that the plot is a little uncomfortable, but in the Pokémon world without poison resistance, for the audience, Absolutely deadly poison.

Tou Zi also felt very uncomfortable, and felt that the protagonist was a villain, a villain who used Pokémon as a tool. Such a protagonist is actually not pleasing.

Touko also put forward her suggestion, suggesting that the character of the male protagonist should be better, at least not so bad.

Shen Yun also knows this, but if once revised, the subsequent change will not be so big, and it will not be tear-jerking.

Soon, with Touko's help, the script was almost completed a quarter of the progress, and the script had come to the time of real transformation.

After writing this story about the complete transformation of the male protagonist, the previous plot is almost complete, and the rest of the plot is three-fifths of the sugar, and the last one-fifth of the knife.

After all, the script is not something that can be solved in a day or two, even if Shen Yun has a quick thinking Contest Condition blessing.

"Wuwuwu, why is this happening? Can't they have a happy ending?" After watching this episode, Tou Zi's big bright eyes were already red, and tears kept falling.

She didn't want to cry either, but the content was so touching and miserable.

A villainous protagonist who forcibly evolved in order to save Trainer, who regards Pokémon as a tool, who can escape by himself, but risks his life to save his own Pokémon.

Such changes and contrasts can completely move the audience in the Pokémon world, and what they like most is the bond between humans and Pokémon.

However, after evolving from Ralts to Gardevoir, Gardevoir's body has been irreparably wounded. Only by going to the Hoenn Region, finding Jirachi, who wakes up only once in a thousand years, and wishing on it, can heal Gardevoir's body.

At the same time, after learning the news, the male protagonist has a lot of emotional changes, regret, sadness, Rage and hatred for himself, and love for Gardevoir.

The plot stopped abruptly here, Shen Yun did not continue to write, the subsequent plot is sugar, sweet candy, the male protagonist's feelings for Gardevoir, after a year of getting along, will also be sublimated from love to love the level of love.

How sweet the plot is after that, how bad the ending is.

Only a tragic ending can truly elevate the entire film.

"An la an la, there are still four-fifths of the plot to be finished." Shen Yun comforted a few words, which was also a little funny. Before, he kept talking about how the male protagonist was set up, but now he doesn't mention it at all. .

"Is this script not bad." Shen Yun asked with a slight smile.

He can also be regarded as a top student of Beiying. With the blessing of quick thinking, he has added so many elements of the world he lives in. Not to mention the movie that beats this world, but it can definitely be called a masterpiece. .

After all, he also added a lot of elements unique to the Pokémon world, as well as contradictions.

For example, many Trainers regard Pokémon as a tool, and they also abandon weak Pokémon. Ralts protect the master, forcibly evolve, and then the male protagonist risks his life to save the female protagonist. For the audience of the Pokémon world, it is also a big plus. sub option.

"For now, it's really good, but the front part may persuade a lot of people." Tou Zi wiped his tears and said.

"This is something that can't be helped. If the character of the male protagonist is weakened, will you still be so moved by the subsequent reversal?" Shen Yun smiled lightly, there must be gains and losses, he believes! As long as there is one person who can survive this plot and see the plot reversed later, with the barrenness of the Pokémon world film and television circle, he will definitely become a true fan of this series of works, and it will be crazy for others to watch it.

This tap water is the best.

And Shen Yun doesn't believe that the forbidden love between humans and Pokémon, such a big gimmick, can't attract audiences.

In the film and television circle of the Pokémon world, there is love between humans and between Pokémon, but there is no love between humans and Pokémon. Most of it is the friendship and bond between humans and Pokémon.

Shen Yun didn't dare to consolidate the ticket, his movie could be a hit, but it would attract some people and make money without any problem.

"That's true." Tou Zi was stunned for a moment. If the male protagonist wasn't so vile and disgusted, the reversal of the later episode would not have been so moving.

It is precisely because of the badness of the male protagonist that the reversal at the back will be touching.

"Okay, let's go find Actors first. There are quite a few Actors needed in front of this script." Shen Yun put away the script, according to his plan, only one fifth of the Actors needed to be the most.

For the next four-fifths, only the shots of the male and female protagonists are enough, but no other Actors are needed.