Hogwarts: Becoming a god from reselling fresh food

The second volume is over, let’s summarize as usual.

The length of this roll is okay, and it’s basically a double-line structure. Overall, I’m satisfied with it.

There are just some minor problems with the rhythm, such as Murphy's second discovery of the Auror investigation and the pressure from the Muggle community. In fact, it was originally intended to be two small crises to create a sense of urgency. . But some of them are too repetitive and feel stereotyped, which may cause everyone's aesthetic fatigue. I am not willing to write them myself, so I merged them.

Because of this merger, the order of some parts of my plot has changed. The insertion of the agent's small branch line was a bit abrupt and relieved the overall tension.

However, because the confrontation has not yet entered the climax, the impact is not great.

Regarding the plot.

The path the protagonist wants to take is contrary to the overall thinking of the wizards. He is the one who wants to break the order of the wizarding world, so it is inevitable to stand on the opposite side of the Aurors.

At the same time, Aurors are different from so-called pure-blood nobles such as Malfoy. They act with justice in their hearts, and they are actually respectable as Murphy's enemies.

The confrontation between Murphy and the Aurors can be seen as a battle of ideas, so I wanted to make the Aurors more positive. From their perspective, Murphy is actually a dark wizard who does everything he can.

The characters of Scrimgeour and Kingsley are actually different in my book and the original work. But firstly, there are not many named characters and there are too few choices. Secondly, they can be regarded as the same as those in the original work. Some differences are caused by the different timelines of the original work.

But overall, I don’t think I’ve strayed away from the essential characteristics of these two characters.

Scrimgeour is serious and rigid, but in the original book, he died to keep Harry's secret. He is a character who is not afraid of sacrifice and power, and is worthy of the name Auror.

I actually have always liked this character. The complexity of his character makes me feel more charming than the ordinary Order of the Phoenix.

In this volume, under forced circumstances, he stepped forward and took responsibility for his subordinates, which is a small tribute to his sacrificial spirit in the original work.

In the original work, Kingsley is more gentle and steady, a more dignified character who can give people a sense of calm, but now he is still younger than he was then. He already has strength and talent, but he has not yet After experiencing enough patience and deeper wisdom, the protagonist helped him make up for this lesson.

In the future, he will definitely be a stronger opponent for Murphy on his way forward.

The protagonist is growing, and the enemies are not static.

Although Murphy is the protagonist, the same thing means different things to different people.

I hope I can write a story in which the characters act according to their own will and beliefs, rather than the so-called cool story where friends and foes are just tools. Maybe I am no longer a teenager, I can no longer enjoy that kind of pleasure...

Finally, I would like to thank all book friends for their votes and comments, book friend 1652592300862124032, book friend 20170809165400702, book friend 20230423062327784, the dawn of night, and the east wind awakening the heroic dream, for your rewards.

I originally wanted to show my monthly tickets and recommended list to thank you, but after searching for a long time I couldn’t find where I could export them in batches, so I had to give up. Anyway, thank you very much for your support.

In the next volume, I plan to open some new pictures and make some preparations. The writing method may be different from the two volumes, but please be patient and follow it. I will do my best to provide you with a good-looking story.

In addition, there are questions about whether there is a female protagonist... Well, generally there is not, but there may be plots that everyone would like to see.

thank you all.