Full-time mage: I have a demon killing system

Chapter 256
In Yaodu, Leng Qing is still the deputy presiding judge of Lingyin Temple, and her promotion is just around the corner.

It depends on where the presiding judge is lacking. Unfortunately, he was injured during this mission and stayed in the Parthenon for a year of recuperation.

I'm sure you can do it, but you're not dealing with a sheep at the mercy of others.

They released false news that the female deputy judge was dead. Fortunately, I kept an extra eye on it.

"Don't let some idiots disturb my masterpiece again, it is impossible that there is only Sa Lang in this world without Leng Jue!" said the boy with purple eyes.

As a rising star of the assassin, Bei Jiang has the same name as the other three super-powerhouses. His strength cannot only be based on his cultivation. Could it be that killers can't be crushed when they take orders.

He can escape under the eyes of the super-level, and Leng Qing is under the protection of the Yaodu Tower, Mo Fan said unless he is a Forbidden Curse Mage.

Otherwise, he would never be able to get through, but Bei Jiang delivered a fatal blow.

Dark erosion is like poisoning, the enemy is in the dark and I am in the light, so what about the super mage, and I will not fight you head-on.

When fighting Mo Fan, I didn't expect Mo Fan to have compressed shells. Since he couldn't use it at the same time, he had to divide the work with Yan Ji to do this.

Sa Long is not that strong, but he is a terrifying villain.

The same goes for Bei Jiang. His abilities are very strange. If he comes to assassinate Mo Fan directly, Mo Fan will definitely die.

The reason why Mo Fan was able to win was because of Leng Qing's victimization, which made a group of people study the ability of the craftsman and guard against it.

To put it bluntly, in the absence of any contact, Mo Fan might not know how he died. Think about how many people Mo Fan killed with the ability of the humble craftsman.

Lingling's older sister, Leng Qing, seems to be about to become the presiding judge, and her cultivation is not the most outstanding among the members of the trial.

However, her commanding ability and personnel allocation ability are extremely strong. Many judges and judges obeyed her dispatch, and made a lot of contributions in the trial meeting.

Including the extermination of the Ming Island Black Vatican, she was also considered a great achievement.

Recently, Mo Fan heard that Leng Qing should be promoted to the presiding judge, but no matter how he heard Lingling's tone, something bad happened.

"My sister was targeted by a master from the Hall of Assassins, and almost died in Yaodu." Lingling's voice was a little disturbed, but also a little scared.

"What a terrifying dark ability!!" Feng Zhoulong said.

The insight of a super-level mage is far superior to that of a high-level mage, but Feng Zhoulong has nothing to do with that humble craftsman.

Such a killer is really terrifying, even a super mage may be killed without precaution!
Leng Qing played for the first time: the Black Snake of the Water Capital, providing Mo Fan with clues to the source of the plague. His strength is unknown, but he is definitely not super-level.

The second time was: helping Mo Fan chase the staff of the Parthenon Temple who took Xinxia away, and fighting Dikaius.

Dikaius is the entourage of the super mage Gloken, Leng Qing's strength is high-level 2-3.

The third time was: to provide Mo Fan and Mu Ningxue with information about the Ming Island Black Vatican. Liu Ru also appeared when she broke through to the Commander level, but her strength was not mentioned.

The fourth time was: when Xinxia was framed as Sa Lang, Leng Qing, Tang Yue and others notified Mo Fan, explaining the reason, but did not mention strength.

The fifth time is: Excavating Leng Jue's conspiracy and being hunted down by Bei Jiang, that's what the host is talking about, but the strength is still not mentioned.

Mo Fan said that her cultivation was not the most outstanding among the members of the trial, because the article repeatedly described the prestige of Feng Zhoulong, a super mage.

I don't think Leng Qing has super-level strength, and the plot super-level at that time was at the top level.

The sixth time was: Mo Fan took Apas to Greece after tossing from Egypt, when he encountered the black dragon capture plan.

It has been more than a year since the last rest, and the strength is mentioned as super-level.

Due to the injury, the cultivation base should not improve, but the Parthenon Goddess Peak is a holy place for repairs, and it may also be broken through at this time.

Leng Qing didn't seem to appear in the scene after that, until the decisive battle in the devil's capital, when he and Lingling went to rescue Grandpa, he made an appearance, but his strength is unknown.

I should be considered one of the first people to read Uncle Luan’s novels. When I was in the second grade of junior high school, I accidentally read "League of Legends: Who Will Confront Me".

Originally holding the mentality of watching and playing, it turned out to be out of control.

Now that I am a freshman, it can be said that I have read Uncle Luan's books for 6 years, and I have read them for an extra year in high school for some reason.

I don't want to comment too much on the novel "Striving for the Front", I think this book can be a god in the online game novel world!
I really feel much better than a certain master.

Some time ago, I didn't have time to watch it because of my busy studies, so I kept it.I just finished watching it today, and I'm still quite impressed.

What attracts me the most about Uncle Luan's novels is that they don't play cards according to routines, unlike the books of so-and-so and so-and-so, who are basically carved out of the same mold.

I think the setting, plot, and world view of this book are really good.

The Chapter of Pearl Academy, the chaos of the ancient capital, the battle of the World Schools, the Patron Rebellion, the Battle of the Kraken in the Demon City, etc.

It's really exciting to watch, and it can be said that the previous copy of the plot has hardly disappointed me.

Every time the plot develops, I am very surprised. It can be seen that Luan Shuo is better at plot description.

In addition, the background of the full-time world is the real world, which has a strong sense of immersion. For example, the catastrophe of the ancient capital and the battle of the Kraken in the magical capital all gave me a strong sense of imagery.

However, the shortcomings of this book are also obvious.

First of all, I personally think that Uncle Luan is not good at describing characters.

For example, Mu Ningxue, the first 1000 chapters are pitifully small, and there are a large number of characters in several dungeons that do not explain the follow-up at all.

For example, Heidi and Blanchine of the Alpine Academy, who were considered important characters in the Alpine Academy chapter, suddenly disappeared and went directly to another instance.

Another example is Wei Guang, who found no such person directly.

Originally, I thought he would be the key figure in Mo Fan’s rescue of Mu Ningxue, but in the end, there was no further story.

Of course, there are still better portrayed characters, such as Mu Bai, following the routines of other novels.

A character like Mu Bai is a cannon fodder for the protagonist to level up. However, I never expected that he would persist until the finale and become a twelve-winged fallen angel.

And it was very tragic.

In the end, there are several female characters who have a close relationship with Mo Fan, all of which have disappeared.

Asha Ruiya, Apas, Tang Yue, Ai Tutu, Jiang Shaoxu, Lingling, and Mu Nujiao explained it, and the others did not mention it.

Emotional drama is also a problem in this book. I still don't feel how much Mu Ningxue and Mo Fan love each other, but I feel very dry.

However, the description of the characters and emotional scenes in "Struggle" is very good, which also makes me very puzzled, maybe Uncle Luan is getting old?

In addition, the biggest problem with this book is that the world view is too big, so big that Uncle Luan can no longer control it, and many pits are too difficult to fill.

In fact, many writers are unable to write a book as huge as the world view.

Secondly, the progress in the later period was too hasty. So many chapters of Sarang and the Black Holy See were gone in just a few chapters, which is really unsatisfactory.

However, what I can't accept the most is that the final boss suddenly becomes Holy City and Michael.

In fact, Uncle Luan can continue to write. After the holy city chapter is over, he can continue to write about Leng Yue and the emperor of the extreme south.

It is much better that the final boss is the emperor of the extreme south.

It can be written that in order to completely solve the sea monster's problem, Mo Fan had a decisive battle with Leng Yue, and finally teamed up with Qinglong Mu Ning Xue Xinxia to kill Leng Big Eye, causing the sea monster's vitality to be seriously injured.

Give up attacking the country, at least return the country's coastal areas to a complete peace.

Then write about gathering the power of the world (holy city + top ten organizations + each big country) to crusade against the emperor in the extreme south.

It would be better to have a similar ending by eradicating an emperor with the strength of the roof of the world, and making other demon kingdoms settle down.

Now Mo Fan is just the strongest human being. With all due respect, a character like Michael is really not suitable to be the final boss.

Overall, Versatile Mage is a well-plotted but incomplete novel.

Why is a certain young man famous? Although their novels are very routine, they are complete, with very few unfilled holes. Their books all have a structured outline.

Uncle Luan feels that he has no outline when writing a book, and it is really uncomfortable to write whatever he thinks of.

(End of this chapter)