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Chapter 53 Little Red Riding Hood and the Big Bad Wolf

Zhang Yang sat in front of the computer, took a sip of water, patted his face, raised his spirits, and criticized the story written by Chen Hang, a layman, from a professional perspective.

"Once upon a time, there was a very cute little girl who liked everyone who saw her, but the one who liked her most was her grandmother, who simply gave her whatever she wanted. Once, her grandmother gave her a little red riding hood made of velvet, wearing her head It was just right on the top. From then on, the little girl didn't wear any other hats, so everyone began to call her Little Red Riding Hood."

After reading the first paragraph, Zhang Yang smiled contemptuously.It's nothing special!There is no bright spot, and it takes a long paragraph of words to explain a nickname, and it is put into the novel. This is called hydrology, you know?
After reading the first paragraph, Zhang Yang's expectations for this story were greatly reduced.A layman is a layman, singing is okay, writing stories?just forget it.

However, considering that Chen Hang's main business is a singer, he is quite popular, with 20 followers on his Weibo account.Zhang Yang didn't dare to start spraying directly after reading the first paragraph.

He bit the bullet and continued to read.You must read this story, pick out the shortcomings, and list them, so that Chen Hang and those fans have nothing to say.

Keep looking down.

One day, her mother told Little Red Riding Hood that her grandmother was sick and not in good health, and asked Little Red Riding Hood to send a piece of cake and wine to her grandmother.

Little Red Riding Hood agreed.

Before going out, the mother said to Little Red Riding Hood: "Before it is dark, you should start quickly. Remember, you must walk slowly on the road, and you must not leave the main road, otherwise you will fall, and grandma will not be able to eat anything. Remember to enter Don't look here and there when you get to grandma's house, but say 'good morning'."

After reading this passage, Zhang Yang's opinion of the story changed slightly.

Finally point the question.

The reason why the Education Bureau called for papers was because a child was so curious that he ran into an alley on the way to school, and finally got lost and was arrested by human traffickers.

Chen Hang's story has been written here, and the topic has already been selected, which meets the requirements of the Education Bureau for essays.

Mother told Little Red Riding Hood to walk on the main road, not to look around at grandma's house, but to say hello, all of these are educational.

But this is just the beginning, Chen Hang may not be able to write well later.

So Zhang Yang continued to watch.

After making an agreement with her mother, Little Red Riding Hood set off with red wine and cake, and met the big bad wolf as soon as she entered.

But Little Red Riding Hood doesn't know that the big bad wolf is a villain, so she is not afraid of him.

The big bad wolf asked Little Red Riding Hood where he was going, and Little Red Riding Hood replied truthfully, telling him to go to his grandmother's house to deliver wine and cakes, and also gave her the address of her grandmother's house.

The wolf thought about it, and a plan came to his mind, and he urged Little Red Riding Hood to say that the scenery on the road is beautiful, the flowers are in full bloom, the fragrance is overflowing, and the birds are singing on the trees.It's still early, why not look back at the beautiful scenery along the way?
After hearing what the wolf said, Little Red Riding Hood thought these flowers were very beautiful. Anyway, it was still early, so she wanted to pick one and give it to her grandmother.Every time she plucked a flower, she felt that the flowers in front seemed more beautiful.Gradually left the road and walked into the depths of the forest.

Seeing this, Zhang Yang already felt nervous. He assumed the vision of Little Red Riding Hood, slapped the table and scolded: "Little Red Riding Hood, are you an idiot? You actually told Big Bad Wolf your grandmother's address. Now Big Bad Wolf has gone to your grandma At home, I am going to set up a scheme to catch you and grandma, and you are still picking flowers here."

Zhang Yang was already annoyed by the plot.

Sure enough, the big bad wolf came to grandma's house, first knocked on the door to test it out, and when he learned that the door was not locked, he rushed in and swallowed grandma in one gulp.

Then, the big bad wolf put on grandma's clothes, disguised as grandma, and waited for the arrival of Little Red Riding Hood.

Little Red Riding Hood picked a lot of flowers, and finally thought of grandma, so she rushed in the direction of grandma's house.

"Don't go! Your grandma has been eaten, are you going to give her head? Go home quickly."

Zhang Yang looked worried.He really wanted to say to Chen Hang, give me your pen, and I will write it.

Little Red Riding Hood has arrived at her grandmother's house, and the door of her grandmother's house is open, which makes her feel very strange.The grandmother's house, which she usually likes very much, now has a strange atmosphere.

"Of course it's weird, your grandma is gone, it's a wolf, idiot."

Zhang Yang couldn't help cursing.

What Chen Hang wrote is too touching.To let readers know that grandma was eaten by the big bad wolf, the wolf pretended to be grandma and waited for Little Red Riding Hood, and even wrote that Little Red Riding Hood ran to grandma's house.

This is the same as some unscrupulous authors who write that the protagonist is green, and it is heart-wrenching to watch.

"Good morning."

After hearing what her mother said, Little Red Riding Hood said hello first.When she saw "grandmother" lying on the bed, she felt a little different from usual, and said again.

"Grandma, why are your ears so big?"

"In order to listen to you better, be good."

"But grandma, why are your eyes so big?"

"To see you better, my dear."

"Grandma, why are your hands so big?"

"I can hug you better!"

"Grandma, why is your mouth so big?"

"Eat you in one bite for convenience."

The wolf's words suddenly became cold, and he jumped up from the bed, swallowing Little Red Riding Hood in one gulp.

"Damn! This is a story written for children? Grandma and Little Red Riding Hood are eaten directly, will it scare the children?"

Seeing that Little Red Riding Hood was also eaten, Zhang Yang sighed that Chen Hang's way is really wild.

Zhang Yang continued to watch. It turned out that the passing hunter heard someone snoring in the house, and happened to leave the door open, so he came in to take a look.

As soon as he came in, the hunter realized that it was not grandma lying on the bed, but a big bad wolf.

The hunter quickly picked up the shotgun, ready to shoot the sleeping wolf, but remembered that the grandmother who had been swallowed by the wolf might still be alive, so he put down the shotgun, picked up the scissors and cut the wolf's belly. Cut it open, and finally rescued Little Red Riding Hood and grandma.

The hunter put a few stones into the stomach of the wolf, and finally the wolf died.

Little Red Riding Hood narrowly escaped death and said: "I will never leave the road and run into the depths of the forest again."

Wo trough!

Seeing the last stroke of genius, Zhang Yang called it awesome.This story matches perfectly with the Education Bureau's call for essays.

Playful and curious children correspond to Little Red Riding Hood, alleys correspond to forests, big bad wolves correspond to human traffickers, and uncle policemen correspond to passing hunters.

The whole story fits perfectly with the previous cases, but through the form of the story, the writing is more vivid, interesting and educational, so that young children will not find this story boring.

After reading this story, Zhang Yang understood the deep meaning of it. He sat on the chair and remained silent for a long time, feeling deeply shocked.

A singer who really knows how to write stories, and what's even more annoying is that he can write so well.

Can you give me a way out?

(End of this chapter)