Grandpa's great writer

Chapter 670 Long Sentences

"The kink in the first sentence of "Yellow Card Man" makes people have to connect this short story with the upcoming book "The Clockwork Girl". There are not many descriptions of clockwork, and they are all mentioned in one stroke, and these one-shot explanations just set off a wonderful world background. The clockwork man is mentioned in the article, and this kind of wind-up man seems to be produced by a Japanese company called Sanxia Yes. Through the author’s not too detailed description, we can see that the so-called clockwork does not refer to the kind of clockwork we think, and even the twisted clockwork mentioned at the beginning has nothing to do with the clockwork person. Because the book It is said that this kind of clockwork man is an illegally genetically modified human body. They have a very special way of walking.

And the clockwork man has no fixed image. Some clockwork men have eight arms, some can run without legs, and some have eyes the size of teacups.Seeing this, can we guess that the so-called clockwork is the name of a genetic technology?The description of the clockwork girl later seems to confirm this day. The reason why the clockwork people are different from human beings should be because of their genes, not because of the clockwork-like things installed on their bodies. "

"Of course, in addition to the relationship with the new book, Chen Fusheng's experience is also very emotional, especially when Chen Fusheng finally pierced Ma Ping's throat with a glass bottle. Will do such a thing. But after thinking about it, it seems very reasonable, if an ordinary person experiences what Chen Fusheng experienced, he should become different."

"From this "Yellow Card Man", we seem to be able to see the dark style of the new book. Reading the whole novel, people feel like they are stuck in a mud, unable to move their legs."

This is an analysis of "Yellow Card Man" written by a well-known online media person.

However, the people who wrote the comments obviously still have some misunderstandings about the clockwork, because the clockwork is the clockwork, which is similar to the clockwork that people know in reality, not some so-called genetic technology.

Of course, the twisted clockwork in the book is more advanced than the mechanical clockwork we see now, and can store more energy.

……

On Earth, "Yellow Card Man" came out after "Wind-up Girl", which is like a side story, and it can be regarded as a further description of Chen Fusheng and Yellow Card Man.

However, there is no problem at all in releasing "Yellow Card Man" ahead of time. Just look at the reactions of readers. Now they have begun to have a strong interest in the world view of "A Clockwork Girl" because of "Yellow Card Man". .

Of course, some people also had associations with the massacre of Chinese by Malays in the book, and asked Zhang Zhong on the Internet if this massacre was an allusion to the previous massacre of Chinese in ink mud.

It's not that everyone thinks of ink pads when they hear about the Tu Hua incident, but because of Chen Fusheng's psychological activities in the book.

The reason why the Malays hate the Chinese in the book is exactly the same as the reason why the Indo people hate the Chinese, both are caused by the gap between the rich and the poor.

Back then, the Chinese in India had a good life and a high social level. It was racial hatred, but it was actually a group hatred of the rich.

Therefore, readers have no way not to connect these two things together.

However, Zhang Zhong has never expressed it publicly, neither refuted nor agreed, anyway, just let the readers think for themselves.

……

"Dad, the teacher said to write something different today."

On Friday evening, when Zhang Zhong went to pick up Pengpeng, the girl told him that the teacher was not satisfied with her diary for the past two days, so she asked her to write something different.

"But what I write is different every day." Pengpeng scratched his ear and scratched his cheek.

Zhang Chong looked at his daughter's distressed look, and smiled. It is true that this girl writes differently every day, but it is all related to food.

I ate red pork tonight.

Had chicken tui tonight.

I ate cabbage tonight.

……

This is the content of Pengpeng's diary these days. It starts with "I ate it tonight", and then adds a dish that I ate tonight. If she eats the same dish for two consecutive nights, she will be happier, even You don't even need to change the next few words.

Zhang Zhong looked at his daughter and suggested, "Why don't you write tonight that the teacher asked you to write something different."

"Is that okay too?"

"Of course you can, but if you want to write something else, you can. For example, the teacher asked you to write something different, but you couldn't think of what to write, so you asked your father what to write, and your father suggested that you write about the teacher. Let you write something different."

This passage was like a tongue twister, which stunned Peng Peng.

Seeing the bewildered expression on Pengpeng's face, Zhang Zhong continued to increase his horsepower and followed another nesting doll: "If this is not enough, you can write about the teacher asking you to write something different, and you ask Dad what you should write, Dad I suggest that you write about the teacher asking you to write something different, but you don’t know what Dad means when he says that you write about the teacher asking you to write something different.”

"It's so difficult." Pengpeng patted his forehead, feeling more distressed.

In fact, Zhang Zhong didn't intend to tease Pengpeng, he also wanted to exercise Pengpeng's language ability through this kind of long sentences...

Well, Zhang Zhong felt that this reason could not even convince himself, he just wanted to tease Peng Peng.

Along the way, Peng Peng didn't speak, as if he was still thinking about what Zhang Zhong said just now.

When they got home, Pengpeng suddenly said, "Father, I know what you mean by asking me to write about your suggestion that the teacher ask me to write something different."

Zhang Zhong looked at Pengpeng in surprise, although the girl didn't complete the dolls just now, but the whole sentence was correct, she was pretty good.

He smiled and nodded, "Okay, then you can write. You already understand what I told you before asking you to write. I suggested that you write about the teacher asking you to write something different."

Another long sentence, Peng Peng frowned, raised his head, his whole body was about to collapse, "Ah, dad, my brain is about to explode."

Haha, don't say that Peng Peng's head is about to explode.

If she really wrote this in the diary, it is estimated that their teachers will have to react for a while before they can read this sentence.After all, the language habits of Chinese people do not have such long sentences, which is different from that of Germans.

Zhang Zhong used to work in Germany for a while, where many well-educated people like to speak a long sentence, put a lot of attributives, and make ordinary sentences very complicated.

(End of this chapter)