Traveling through the book: The heroine peeps at the diary and the character design collapses

"boom!"

Lin Yi turned into a golden light and punched a big hole in the original demon.

"Impossible, I am the original demon, I have killed 49 Daoists, there is no way I will lose..."

When dying, the original demon still couldn't believe that he would be defeated.

Just after the primordial demon fell, a holy light lit up between the heaven and the earth, opening an ancient gate.

The two walked in at the same time.

Inside, there is a scent of birds and flowers, and a statue holding a sword stands tall.

There is a line of writing written under the statue.

"Adjudicator, the supreme existence of the entire universe, but only one person can be the adjudicator."

When seeing this line of words, Xiao Zhantian and Lin Yi were taken aback at the same time, turned their heads to look at each other, and understood something at this moment.

The eyes of the two were burning with flames of war, and they raised their fists and rushed towards each other frantically.

At the same time, the gate of the Land of Judgment slowly closed.

(End of the book!)
The 'crackling' sound of the keyboard stopped abruptly.

Looking at the blinking cursor on the computer screen, Lin Yichang let out a long sigh of relief.

"call!"

""The Return of the Celestial Lord of the City" is finally over."

"Little babes, let me see your ending!"

Lin Yi sat on the chair full of ambition and was lost in thought for several minutes.

He wrote this book for three full years, how many three years are there in his life?
I hope readers will give a good review.

He picked up the water glass to drink water, and clicked on the comment section expectantly.

"This is the end of the dog author? There are still a lot of holes to fill."

"The agreed 108 harems, you write a der! You only need to count how many."

"I agree with the point above! The author of the dog is deceiving."

"This book is really being forcibly fed shit, licked by dogs until there is nothing left, and it is disgusting."

"Writing shit! I can write better than you."

"This book is too poisonous, please don't read it."

"Thanks to the brother upstairs for testing the drug. Fortunately, I read the comments first and slipped away~"

"Damn shit! Get out of the dog author, the ending is too cruel, if you don't change me, report back!"

"What the hell are you writing! There are so many beautiful heroines who don't push you, and they only know how to fight with Xiao Zhantian from the beginning to the end. Are you sick as a dog author?"

"I'm about to die of anger, who has quick-acting heart-rescuing pills?"

"Don't start a new book for the dog author, you are not suitable for writing novels, go find a class."

"..."

Lin Yi was so angry that he sprayed water directly on the keyboard.

Incredible to read these unfriendly book reviews.

"Three years! I have been writing this book for three years. Do you know how I have spent these three years?"

"I giao!"

"You can write, take the keyboard."

"Boys, when I was typing, you were still wearing crotch pants."

Lin one finger on the keyboard 'crackling' typing non-stop.

As an old Zauner, no one is allowed to spray more than himself.

I don't know if it was because I was typing too fast, or because of the water entering before, white smoke rose from the keyboard.

"Oh!"

With a bang, the keyboard exploded directly.

At the same time, his body disappeared into the room.

On the computer screen, an unfinished sentence was displayed.

"Damn it, God Ma Dong..."

……

The sky is in full swing, the sun is shining brightly, the birds are singing and the flowers are fragrant.

Inside a red Ferrari, a young man is slowly waking up.

"Master, wake up, school is here."

A respectful voice came.

Lin Yi shuddered all over, and opened his eyes.

Looking at the housekeeper beside him and the familiar school gate, he remembered the opening plot of his novel.

"Damn it! I'm trapped in a novel."

At the same time, a screen of a live broadcast room appeared in front of his eyes, and the voice of the system's sister could be heard next to his ears.

【Ding!Congratulations to the host, the system will be strengthened if the text is changed. 】

[You can go through any plot node to modify the text. 】

[Only if you change the book to the satisfaction of the readers, can you return to the original world. 】

He fixed his eyes on the comment area, and it was full of comments from readers cursing and complaining about the plot of the book.

Under the guidance of the system sister, he slowly got out of the car, and decided to change the plot of the first act according to the reader's request.

He found that this system is quite strong, and he can choose any time point in the book to revise the text.

"Okay, okay, isn't it just pushing the heroine? No problem, just watch me."

He tidied his clothes, stood at the gate, and waited for Senior Colonel Tang to come out.

As for whether he can change it to satisfy the readers and return to the original world, that is another story.

(End of the book)